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the causes of smoking and possible solutions that may help to decrease the number of people that smoke in society.

the causes of smoking and possible solutions that may help to decrease the number of people that smoke in society. 3bE5b
Smoking is becoming more and more common among young and old individuals. Despite its well-known dangers to health, people sadly still smoke and find it extremely hard to quit this bad addictive habit. This essay will discuss the causes of smoking and possible solutions that may help to decrease the number of people that smoke in society. To start with, nicotine which is the potent substance inside cigarettes is addictive, people start smoking from stress and peer pressure. Generally, smoking relieves stress and its easy to start by taking a cigarette during a stressful day. one cigarette leads to another, and with time it becomes a habit that they aren't able to get rid of. As for peer pressure, someone who started smoking might tell you to have one cigarette for fun, and with time the same loop ends up happening. For example, stressed university students start by having a cigarette with their friends during exam period to take a break and relieve stress from all the exams, and there you have it, a habit. In order to reduce smoking, awareness campaigns about smoking effects on health should become mandatory for people to attend in universities, schools and companies. These campaigns not only help people become self conscious about smoking, but it can also be a possibility for people to meet other smokers that potentially would like to quit smoking. Therefore, motivate each other to do so. Another solution would be, buying nicotine gums from the pharmacy. These gums can fulfill smokers craving for smoking until they are able to completely stop. As a conclusion, smoking is extremely bad for health and yet a lot of people smoke, there are many ways a person can help him/herself in order to stop smoking and I urge everyone to start because the earlier the better.
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old
individuals. Despite its well-known
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dangers
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people
sadly
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smoke and find it
extremely
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hard
to quit this
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addictive habit. This essay will discuss the causes of
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smoking
and possible solutions that may
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help
to decrease the number of
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people
that smoke in society.

To
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start
with, nicotine which is the potent substance inside
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cigarettes
is addictive,
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people
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start
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smoking
from
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stress
and peer pressure.
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,
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smoking
relieves
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stress
and its easy to
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start
by taking a
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cigarette
during a stressful day.
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one
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cigarette
leads to another, and with time it becomes a habit that they aren't able to
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get
rid of. As for peer pressure, someone who
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smoking
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you to have one
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cigarette
for fun, and with time the same loop ends up happening.
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stressed
university students
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start
by having a
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cigarette
with their friends during exam period to take a break and relieve
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stress
from all the exams, and there you have it, a habit.

In order to
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reduce
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smoking
, awareness campaigns about
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smoking
effects on health should become mandatory for
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people
to attend in universities, schools and
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companies
. These campaigns not
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only
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help
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people
become
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self conscious
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,
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people
to
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other smokers that
potentially
would like to quit
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smoking
.
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, motivate each other to do
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. Another solution would be, buying nicotine gums from the pharmacy. These gums can fulfill smokers craving for
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smoking
until they are able to completely
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stop
.

As a conclusion,
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smoking
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bad
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yet
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a lot of
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people
smoke, there are
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many
ways a person can
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help
him/herself in order to
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stop
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smoking
and I urge everyone to
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start
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because
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IELTS essay the causes of smoking and possible solutions that may help to decrease the number of people that smoke in society.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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