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the cause and the solve of marine pollution

the cause and the solve of marine pollution a7MBw
In terms of resources, the sea is a very rich and diverse environment, it has provided a significant source of income for the Vietnamese people. However, Marine pollution is becoming increasingly serious and concerning around the world. Natural disasters, especially human ones, are two factors that lead to serious pollution. So, what are the solutions to solve this problem? The first source of pollution can be attributed to the natural disasters. Water pollution from rain, snow melt, flood or windstorm. Flooding has the potential to degrade the purity of fresh water in seas and oceans. Flooding causes dirt to be stirred up in the sewers. Garbage, residues, toxic chemicals, and other pollutants are then washed into the sea, polluting fresh water in the sea and oceans. Nature only plays a minor role in pollution, and humans are the primary cause of serious pollution today. What have people done to contribute to the environment's marine becoming increasingly polluted? Firstly, as a result of domestic waste generated by residents of coastal areas. Every day, humans emit a massive amount of waste into the environment, the majority of which is not properly treated and is discharged directly into the marine environment. Secondly, wastewater from mining activities. Exploration for oil and gas, as well as fishing in the sea, all have a negative impact on seawater. The use of explosives, toxic substances, and oil spills when fishing causes sea water to become increasingly polluted. To overcome the above-mentioned pollution, people and governments should work together to restore the marine environment's beauty. The first is proper wastewater treatment. Wastewater must not be discharged directly into the sea but must be treated through a treatment process. Build many good and standard waste water and waste treatment systems before being discharged. Second, all mining and fishing activities must be strictly regulated. The use of explosives and toxic chemicals in the mining industry is strictly prohibited. Follow "catch and release" procedures to save more marine life. Finally, raise awareness of environmental protection. The best way to protect water resources is to raise people's awareness. Pollution will be significantly reduced as long as humans actively protect clean water. In conclusion, because the sea has provided many benefits to people, everyone should be aware and work together to protect the marine environment.
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sea
is a
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very
rich and diverse
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environment
, it has provided a significant source of income for the Vietnamese
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people
.
However
,
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Marine
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pollution
is becoming
increasingly
serious and concerning around the world. Natural disasters,
especially
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human
ones, are two factors that lead to serious
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pollution
.
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So
, what are the solutions to solve this problem?

The
first
source of
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pollution
can
be attributed
to the natural disasters.
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Water
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pollution
from rain, snow melt, flood or windstorm. Flooding has the potential to degrade the purity of fresh
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water
in
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seas
and oceans. Flooding causes dirt to
be stirred
up in the sewers. Garbage, residues, toxic chemicals, and other pollutants are then washed into the
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sea
, polluting fresh
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water
in the
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sea
and oceans.

Nature
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only
plays a minor role in
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pollution
, and
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humans
are the primary cause of serious
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pollution
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today
. What have
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people
done to contribute to the environment's
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marine
becoming
increasingly
polluted?
Firstly
,
as a result
of domestic
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waste
generated by residents of coastal areas. Every day,
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humans
emit a massive amount of
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waste
into the
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environment
, the majority of which is not
properly
treated and
is discharged
directly
into the
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marine
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environment
.
Secondly
, wastewater from mining activities. Exploration for oil and gas,
as well
as fishing in the
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sea
, all have a
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negative
impact on seawater. The
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use
of explosives, toxic substances, and oil spills when fishing causes
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sea
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water
to become
increasingly
polluted.

To overcome the above-mentioned
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pollution
,
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people
and
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governments
should work together to restore the
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marine
environment's beauty. The
first
is proper wastewater treatment. Wastewater
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must
not
be discharged
directly
into the
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sea
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but
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must
be treated
through a treatment process. Build
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many
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good
and standard
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waste
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water
and
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waste
treatment systems
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before
being discharged
. Second, all mining and fishing activities
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must
be
strictly
regulated. The
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use
of explosives and toxic chemicals in the mining industry is
strictly
prohibited. Follow
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catch and release
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procedures to save more
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marine
life.
Finally
, raise awareness of environmental protection. The best way to protect
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water
resources is to raise
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people
's awareness.
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Pollution
will be
significantly
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reduced
as long as
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humans
actively
protect clean water.

In conclusion
,
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because
the
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sea
has provided
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many
benefits to
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people
, everyone should be aware and work together to protect the
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marine
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environment
.
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IELTS essay the cause and the solve of marine pollution

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
382 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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