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The bus was late so I decided to walk

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The bus was late so I decided to walk, because I slept through the alarm and can’t reach to the bus stop in time. I took a walk and realized why so traffic today. Because today is the first day of school opening day and all the students are along the road. The view brought me back to my student hood and I remembered all my childhood friends. We all were absolutely delighted to meet each other on first day. Normally schools open in the rainy season and the environment around us made me recollected our golden days. Unlikely in the working environment, all are fiercely competitive and completely different old friends. Nevertheless, we have to struggle a lot to survive and support our family. Fighting! !

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so
 I decided to walk, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I slept through the alarm and can’t reach to the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 in time. I took a walk and realized why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 is the first
 day of school opening day and all the students are along the road. The view brought me back to my student hood and I remembered all my childhood friends. We all were absolutely
 delighted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 each other on first
 day. Normally
 schools open in the rainy season and Consider using "the surrounding environment".the surrounding environment
the environment around us
 made me recollected our golden days. Unlikely in the working environment, all are fiercely
 competitive and completely This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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old
 friends. Nevertheless
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 struggle a lot to survive and support our family. Fighting! ! 