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online class is important than offline

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The discussion about weather or not online class is a controversial one the are people on both side of the argument who have very strong fillings. There are many positive reason for this that i will discuss in this essay now. online class made the guardian affordable, no need to go institution. It's save the important time. Parents can use their time for other purpose. Furthermore student can store class in the device if it need they see any time. In addition parents do not have any worry about their children in this corona virus situation.
The discussion about weather or not online
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class
is a controversial one
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the are
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people
on both side of the argument who have
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very
strong fillings. There are
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many
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positive
reason for this that
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i
will discuss in this essay
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now
.
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online
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class
made the guardian affordable, no need to go institution. It's
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save
the
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important
time. Parents can
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use
their time for other purpose.
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Furthermore
student can store
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class
in the device if it
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need
they
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see
any time. In
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addition
parents do not have any worry about their children in this
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
situation.

IELTS essay online class is important than offline

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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