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The Book Interesting for me

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Today, I wanna talk to you about one book very important for me. This is The book called H. porter-which is one of the books very relevant in the world. The book describes the life of a young wizard named Harry porter and his 2 best friends: Ron and Harmony. Harry was struggling to kill the dark wizard Voldemort whose aim immortalize and destroy all of those who stopped him in his way of ruling the world. To be honest, those books are one of my childhood, This is a gift I was gifted by my father when I was 10 years old. Until now, I just said that it is one of my mind when I Remind my childhood. This book is very important and meaningful for me. For me, A protagonist is a person who motivated me in my life, especially when I felling blue and disappointed about life. I can see The main character is The icon of brave, Indomitable, resilient.
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IELTS essay The Book Interesting for me

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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