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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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IELTS essay The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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