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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good skills. Do you agree or disagree.parenting

The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good skills. parenting J1lB
With the rise in moodernization, there are increase criminal activities by juvenile all across the world. The most approptiant method to decreas juvenile crime is to teavch their parents with perantal skills. I agree to the proffered statement, reasons for which are clarify in the below paraghraphs. Without any doubt, parents and parenting plays an important roll in any persons life. If parents have good parenting skills they teach their children good moral skills. Moreover, parents always teach their children that how to contribute for their child rather than spending time in other activities. For instance, the recent survey conducted in some news paper that the chidren faced good parenting skills by their parents are less involved in non-official acivity. Moving further, children grown up by good parenting skills they they do not attempt any crime. Because they already aware about the law. Good parenting skills also give guidance to their child how to set and achieve the goal. Consequently if children have their clear vision than they don’t go on any other way. In addition to, parent always get ready to teach their child what is wrong and what is right. Consequently if parents have parenting skills than definatly their child would not go any wrong direction and do such crime. To conclude, it is must to educate people with proper parenting skills. It helps to decrees in juvenile crime and country have the great youth for future.
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If
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skills
they teach their
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children
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good
moral
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skills
.
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,
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parents
always teach their
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children
that how to contribute for their
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child
rather
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news paper
that the
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grown up by
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skills
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also
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child
how to set and achieve the goal.
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have their
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skills
than
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direction and do such crime.

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educate
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people
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helps
to decrees in juvenile crime and country have the great youth for future.
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IELTS essay The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with good skills. parenting

Essay
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