Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the best way to reduce crime amog people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v.1

the best way to reduce crime amog people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v. 1
Advertising is one of the most powerful business tools available these days. It is a large demand for numerous companies that aim to increase their sales due to various factors that have promoted effective advertising. This advertises are not necessarily acting in society best interests and this essay will explain why. The company publicity has the same importance that other areas have into the company's structure and it has a strategic meaning to make the business profitable. This publicity tends to use ads to rising their sales, which contains audio-visual techniques that will eventually create on individuals the necessity of obtaining whatever they are seeing. Also, announcements have their backgrounds related to consumers' needs which means that they understand exactly what people want to buy. Advertisements make an important role in the company's life. Therefore, the promotion campaign has only one reason to exist, to promote benefits for those who control the ads. It has the main objective to create the necessity for individuals to acquire goods that they do not need. For example, many consumers are dragging from advertisement to get what companies want to sell even if this business knows that consumers have no need for it. In addition, it has a negative effect on society which becomes demands of superficial things. Companies are using the strategy of advertisement to achieve success at any rate and are manipulating people to buy unneeded products. To summarize, using advertising campaign has been certainly a great rentable strategy for many businesses as they are using researching to understand which goods are very attractive to people to buy even if there is no need from the consumer's side.
Advertising is one of the most powerful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
tools available these days. It is a large demand for numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
that aim to increase their sales due to various factors that have promoted effective advertising. This advertises are not
necessarily
acting in society best interests and this essay will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
publicity has the same importance that other areas have into the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's structure and it has a strategic meaning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
profitable. This publicity tends to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
ads to rising their sales, which contains audio-visual techniques that will
eventually
create on individuals the necessity of obtaining whatever they are seeing.
Also
, announcements have their backgrounds related to consumers'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
which means that they understand exactly what
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
. Advertisements
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's life.

Therefore
, the promotion campaign has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one reason to exist, to promote benefits for those who control the ads. It has the main objective to create the necessity for individuals to acquire
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
that they do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
.
For example
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
consumers are dragging from advertisement to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
want to sell even if this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
knows that consumers have no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
for it.
In addition
, it has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effect on society which becomes demands of superficial things.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Companies
are using the strategy of advertisement to achieve success at any rate and are manipulating
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
unneeded products.

To summarize
, using advertising campaign has been
certainly
a great rentable strategy for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
businesses
as they are using researching to understand which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
attractive to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
even if there is no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
from the consumer's side.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
One should not aim at being possible to understand but at being impossible to misunderstand.
Marcus Fabius Quintilian

IELTS essay the best way to reduce crime amog people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts