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the best way to reduce crime among people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v.2

the best way to reduce crime among people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v. 2
It is irrefutable nowadays, crimes are increasing a lot in order to reduce it parent should get parenting skills thats highly important. however, some of them believe not only parents should teach their children but school teachers highly responsible because most of the time spend time in school. I will discuss this matter before any conclusion can be drawn. On the other hand, juvenile delinquency crimes are happening extreme level due to parents are not supporting their children and they are not taking responsibilities to take care of children. Pupil " why involve in to crime? " because parents doing always fighting in front of them. Due to this reasons behind they are not getting love form their parents and they start to hate this society as a result, they start to do some criminal activities and finally, they will become dangerous criminals against the society. For example, one of the media who has taken a survey about why people are doing crimes and finally given a survey is saying 64%criminals matter from their parents. On the one hand, education is matter to judge the people and one of the survey is saying our education only will decide us about our future. Some of them believe if students go to school then they will to do any criminal activities because teacher make them life better and student will listen what is correct and what is wrong from the teacher only not from the parents. For example, In Kerala crime rate has decreased for the past 10 years and reason is 97% people got educated. To conclude this, government has to take responsibilities to teach parents skills to their parents to reduce the crime rate and parents should know their responsibilities how to make their children as a good manner and involve in social activities rather than teachers.
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crimes
are increasing a lot in order to
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reduce
it
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parent
should
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get
parenting
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skills
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however
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some
of them believe not
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only
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parents
should teach their
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children
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school
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teachers
highly
responsible
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because
most of the time spend time in school. I will discuss this matter
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before
any conclusion can
be drawn
.

On the other hand
, juvenile delinquency
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crimes
are happening extreme level due to
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parents
are not supporting their
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children and
they are not taking responsibilities to take care of
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children
. Pupil
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; why involve in to
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crime
?
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;
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because
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parents
doing always fighting in front of them. Due to
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this
reasons behind they are not getting
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love
form their
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parents and
they
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start
to hate this society
as a result
, they
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start
to do
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some
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criminal
activities and
finally
, they will become
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dangerous
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criminals
against the society.
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, one of the media who
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has
taken a survey about why
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people
are doing
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crimes
and
finally
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given
a survey is saying
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64%criminals
matter from their parents.

On the one hand, education is matter to judge the
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people
and one of the survey is saying our education
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only
will decide us about our future.
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Some
of them believe if students go to school then they will to do any
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criminal
activities
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because
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teacher
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make
them life better and student will listen what is correct and what is
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wrong
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teacher
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only
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parents
.
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, In Kerala
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crime
rate has decreased for the past 10 years and reason is 97%
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people
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got
educated.

To conclude
this,
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government
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has to
take responsibilities to teach
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parents
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skills
to their
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parents
to
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reduce
the
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crime
rate and
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parents
should know their responsibilities how to
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make
their
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children
as a
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good
manner and involve in social activities
rather
than
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teachers
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay the best way to reduce crime among people is to teach parents a good parenting skills. with this statement? give your own opinion and examples. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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