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The best way to plan holiday

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Holiday is a great experience for most of us to recharge our minds, reboot our bodies, and souls. Many people like to plan their holidays just to make every activity should take place on time. However, most people believe that going on holidays without any prior plan is more enjoyable and more adventurous. In my opinion, holidays should be planned, so that every activity will happen in series. Firstly collecting information about the holiday would help us to get best experience from a vacation. if we plan our trip before starting it, holiday activities and events would happen perfectly i and on right time. organizing the organizing the holiday to visit attractive places would enrich our trip experience. So having a plan with an efficient schedule is beneficial. Secondly, find good hotels and restaurants becomes difficult when we go out in free time without any plan. Also, many people face problems in buying tickets and renting cars during the holiday. We can complete entire holiday without any issues or problems by planning it. To sum up, going for a holiday without plan can affect our pastime activities and ruin our leisure time. I think planning can be helpful to complete our holiday on time.
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to visit attractive places would enrich our trip experience.
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with an efficient schedule is beneficial.
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hotels and restaurants becomes difficult when we go out in free
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face problems in buying tickets and renting cars during the
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without any issues or problems by planning it.

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can affect our pastime
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IELTS essay The best way to plan holiday

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
204 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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