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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

A holiday is a great experience for most of us to recharge our minds, bodies, and souls. Planning for any holiday is a daunting process for many. Therefore, they argue if they should have a holiday plan in the first place or not. They support their thoughts that the best way to plan is not to have a plan at all. I can't entirely agree with not planning at all for multiple reasons. Planning would give a holistic view of all trip steps, including the most attractive places to visit at the holiday destination and the expenditures against the personal budget. Collecting information about the holiday destination would help to get the best experience from a vacation. Moreover, organizing the holiday to attend the attractive places' events would enrich the whole trip experience. For example, visiting Egypt without seeing all possible ancient Egyptian pharaohs museums would be a significant loss. Taking full advantage of the holiday's destination would not be possible without a well-planned trip. So, having a plan with an efficient schedule is undoubtedly beneficial. Also, planning would give the luxury of taking price discounts offered ahead of time by tourism companies. Thus, it would decrease the expenditures giving more chances to visit multiple places. For instance, Trip advisor, a smartphone Application for tourism offers, periodically has varieties of recommendations for many worldwide attractive vacations. Furthermore, the discounted rates for hotels and vehicles should the reservation happen early. Consequently, being proactive could save enough money for more chances. Therefore, planning is crucial in terms of getting the best offers. In conclusion, going for a holiday without planning could lead to forgetting to visit all the attractive places at the holiday's destination. Besides, having a holiday plan could save tons of money. So, I'm afraid I can't agree to go on holiday without a plan.
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is a great experience for most of us to recharge our minds, bodies, and souls.
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Planning
for any
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holiday
is a daunting process for
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many
.
Therefore
, they argue if they should have a
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holiday
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plan
in the
first
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place
or not. They support their thoughts that the best way to
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plan
is not to have a
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plan
at all. I can't
entirely
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agree
with not
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planning
at all for multiple reasons.
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Planning
would give a holistic view of all
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trip
steps, including the most
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attractive
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places
to visit at the
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holiday
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destination
and the expenditures against the personal budget.

Collecting information about the
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holiday
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destination
would
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help
to
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get
the best experience from a vacation.
Moreover
, organizing the
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holiday
to attend the
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attractive
places'
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events
would enrich the whole
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trip
experience.
For example
, visiting Egypt without seeing all possible ancient Egyptian pharaohs museums would be a significant loss. Taking full advantage of the holiday's
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destination
would not be possible without a well-planned
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trip
.
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So
, having a
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plan
with an efficient schedule is
undoubtedly
beneficial.

Also
,
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planning
would give the luxury of taking price discounts offered ahead of time by tourism
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companies
.
Thus
, it would decrease the expenditures giving more chances to visit multiple
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places
.
For instance
,
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Trip
advisor, a smartphone Application for tourism offers,
periodically
has varieties of recommendations for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
worldwide
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attractive
vacations.

Furthermore
, the discounted rates for hotels and vehicles should the reservation happen early.
Consequently
, being proactive could save
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
money for more chances.
Therefore
,
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planning
is crucial in terms of getting the best offers.

In conclusion
, going for a
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holiday
without
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planning
could lead to forgetting to visit all the
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attractive
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places
at the holiday's
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destination
.
Besides
, having a
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holiday
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plan
could save tons of money.
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So
, I'm afraid I can't
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agree
to go on
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holiday
without a
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plan
.
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IELTS essay The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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