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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. ” What do you think about this opinion? v.9

The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. ” What do you think about this opinion? v. 9
Nowadays many Chinese parents push their kids to learn foreign language, especially English, which raise a question that how to choose the best English teachers. I tend to believe that the best way for kids to learn English is learning with a native speaker. Some people argue that it is not necessary to learn English with native language users, since we still can learn English grammar and vocabularies with people whose major is English, or even learn them from text books. Also, it is not easy to find a good native teacher to teach students. Some foreigners ask for a large amount of money as their salary, while these money can find a best English teacher in local community. So finding a good English teacher is more important than to employ a teacher whose mother language is English. However, learning English with a native speaker is helpful and students can learn things which a local teacher may not know. For instance, some English saying or the interesting sentences or phrases are only known by native speakers. And students can learn these knowledge which can help them to deep know the culture of other countries. Moreover, students can speak like a native speaker by learning with them and it can help those kids more easily to make friend with other people if they go abroad to have advanced study in the future. To think about these advantages, high salary and other difficulties are overwhelmed by its merits. And that is the reason for why native English users are popular in countries which the first language is not English in today society. In conclusion, learning English from native user is helpful and may also affect the way that student learn or use English in the future. So I tend to advocate this method.
Nowadays
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many
Chinese parents push their kids to
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learn
foreign
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language
,
especially
English, which raise a question that how to choose the best English
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teachers
. I tend to believe that the best way for kids to
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learn
English is
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learning
with a
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native
speaker.

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people
argue that it is not necessary to
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learn
English with
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native
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language
users, since we
still
can
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learn
English grammar and vocabularies with
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people
whose major is English, or even
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learn
them from text books.
Also
, it is not easy to find a
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good
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native
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teacher
to teach
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students
.
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Some
foreigners
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ask for
a large amount of money as their salary, while
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these money
can find
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a
best English
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teacher
in local community.
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finding a
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good
English
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teacher
is more
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important
than to employ a
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teacher
whose mother
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language
is English.

However
,
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learning
English with a
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native
speaker is helpful and
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students
can
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learn
things which a local
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teacher
may not know.
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,
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some
English saying or the interesting sentences or phrases are
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only
known by
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native
speakers. And
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students
can
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learn
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these knowledge
which can
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help
them to deep know the culture of other countries.
Moreover
,
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students
can speak like a
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native
speaker by
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learning
with them and it can
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help
those kids more
easily
to
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make
friend with other
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people
if they go abroad to have advanced study in the future. To
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think
about these advantages, high salary and other difficulties
are overwhelmed
by its merits. And
that is
the reason for why
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native
English users are popular in countries which the
first
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language
is not English in
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today
society.

In conclusion
,
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learning
English from
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native
user is helpful and may
also
affect the way that
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student
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learn
or
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use
English in the future.
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So
I tend to advocate this method.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. ” What do you think about this opinion? v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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