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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this option. v.6

The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this option. v. 6
As an international language in the modern era, it directly influences the academic performance, personal development and communication skills as well. Some people believe that appropriate method to learn English is to study with native speakers. Other people think that there are a number of techniques to become a master in English language. I believe that native English trainers will be very helpful to be perfect in English language. To begin with, although it is not necessarily a language only can be learnt by native speakers, but it can be possible through good English teacher and book also. Moreover, it is very difficult to find a good native guru. If students get successful to detect an intelligent mentor, but a big amount of the fee has demanded by them as a salary. According to me, this idea will not be sufficient for lower class students. As if there are a number of sites and apps are available like YouTube, podcast and so on, which are more convenient for these types of learners. In addition, native speakers are associated with their mother tongue due to this reason they can teach in a better way to students. This is not a tough task to pursue English language. For example, British and American people use different vocabulary, but grammar is used same by them. Native instructors have a very excellent command to pronounce words, vast vocabulary, phrases and idioms. As well, native speakers does not use the same way as a book as if they believe to do a practical work. To illustrate, there are a number of jobs are done by pupils to fill up their fees along with the study. It does not only enhance the level of understanding, but also boosts confidence at job places or company since consumers get satisfied that they are being explained well. To sum up, I strongly agree with the statement that learning English language from native coaches is the easiest and the most effective way to become proficient. The use of language in daily life and learn basic aspects like correct pronunciation, grammar in a right manner.
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language
in the modern era, it
directly
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skills
as well
.
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Some
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people
believe that appropriate method to learn English is to study with
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native
speakers. Other
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people
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think
that there are a number of techniques to become a master in English
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language
. I believe that
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native
English trainers will be
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very
helpful to be perfect in English language.

To
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begin
with, although it is not
necessarily
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language
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only
can be
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
by
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native
speakers,
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but
it can be possible through
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good
English teacher and book
also
.
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, it is
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very
difficult to find a
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good
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native
guru. If students
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get
successful to detect an intelligent mentor,
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but
a
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big
amount of the fee has demanded by them as a salary.
This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".
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, this
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idea
will not be sufficient for lower
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class
students. As if there are a number of sites and apps are available like YouTube, podcast and
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so
on, which are more convenient for these types of learners.

In addition
,
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native
speakers
are associated
with their mother tongue due to this reason they can teach in a better way to students. This is not a tough task to pursue English
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language
.
For example
, British and American
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people
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use
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different
vocabulary,
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but
grammar is
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used
same by them.
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Native
instructors have a
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very
excellent command to pronounce words, vast vocabulary, phrases and idioms.

As well
,
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native
speakers does not
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use
the same way as a book as if they believe to do a practical work. To illustrate, there are a number of jobs
are done
by pupils to fill up their fees along with the study. It does not
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only
enhance the level of understanding,
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but
also
boosts confidence at job places or
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company
since consumers
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get
satisfied that they are being
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explained
well.

To sum up, I
strongly
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agree
with the statement that learning English
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language
from
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native
coaches is the easiest and the most effective way to become proficient. The
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use
of
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language
in daily life and learn basic aspects like correct pronunciation, grammar
Consider replacing "in a right manner" with the adverb for "right"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a right manner
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this option. v. 6

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
353 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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