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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.16

Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. v. 16
In the modern world, many people are willing to constructs friendship with the people, who have similar views and common interests. However, others feel that having a friend, who sometimes disagree with them can be beneficial for their friendship. Personally, I reckon that the friend, who has the same opinions as they are essential for not losing communication through the life. There is no denying that if individuals choose a buddy according their common interests and opinions, they can save their relationship for a long time. It is widely known that the person, who has a similar opinion with you, often do not irritate and always support you in case of trouble. In this reason, some people are keen to choose their friends, according to this method. A good illustration of this is the closeness of Dwayne Johnson and Kevin Hart, who are popular movie stars. Due to their common interests and opinions, they always get on with each other very well during the shooting process of movies. On the other hand, there is a viewpoint that having a friend, who can disagree with you is much more beneficial for the individuals, because they always tell the truth. That is to say, they can always criticize you in order to make you stronger and wiser. In this regard, if you listen to their compliance or critics, you can get a lesson from them. To illustrate, criticism is vital to the business. In this reason, having a business partner or buddy, who has a different viewpoint is beneficial for the individuals. In conclusion, although many people tend to think that having a closeness, which is holding different opinions can be profitable, others feel that the common opinion is crucial for the relationship, because their members always support each other.
In the modern world,
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are willing to
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constructs
friendship with the
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,
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who
have similar views and
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common
interests.
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, others feel that
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having
a
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friend
,
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sometimes
disagree with them can be beneficial for their friendship.
Personally
, I reckon that the
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friend
,
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who
has the same
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opinions
as they are essential for not losing communication through the life.

There is no denying that if individuals choose a buddy according their
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common
interests and
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opinions
, they can save their relationship for a long time. It is
widely
known that the person,
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who
has a similar
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opinion
with you,
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do not irritate and always support you in case of trouble. In this reason,
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some
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people
are keen to choose their
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friends
, according to this method. A
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good
illustration of this is the closeness of Dwayne Johnson and Kevin Hart,
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who
are popular movie stars. Due to their
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common
interests and
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opinions
, they always
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get
on with each
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well during the shooting process of movies.

On the
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hand, there is a viewpoint that
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having
a
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friend
,
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who
can disagree with you is much more beneficial for the individuals,
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because
they always
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tell
the truth.
That is
to say, they can always criticize you in order to
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make
you stronger and wiser. In this regard, if you listen to their compliance or critics, you can
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get
a lesson from them. To illustrate, criticism is vital to the business. In this reason,
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having
a business partner or buddy,
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who
has a
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different
viewpoint is beneficial for the individuals.

In conclusion
, although
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people
tend to
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think
that
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having
a closeness, which is holding
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different
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opinions
can be profitable, others feel that the
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common
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opinion
is crucial for the relationship,
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their members always support each
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.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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