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the best way to fulfill certain new projects is to create a group of people into a team

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The reading states that the best way to fulfill certain new projects is to creat a group of people into a team and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecture casts doubt on this view. First, the reading asserts that a group of people has a wider range of knowledge, experties, and skills while the professor opposes to this view by mentioning that all member of group maybe don't accosiate and just some of them doing their job well. So, whole of the group will benefit completely. Second, in spite of the reading's claim that because of the numbers of people involved and the huge resources, a group can work so quickly. The lecture points out in the group always some people manage what the group did and disscous about that and it results in time consuming. Furthurmore, according to the reading the individual team member has a much better chance to shine to get contributions and ideas recognized. The lecture refutes this view by saying that sometimes some member are so creative but ignore by other members. It leads to decrease their eagerness and decrease their creativity
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into a team and provides three reasons of support.
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view
.

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, the reading asserts that a
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has a wider range of knowledge,
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skills
while the professor opposes to this view by mentioning that all
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maybe

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accosiate
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of them doing their job well.
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, whole of the
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will benefit completely.

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the reading's claim that
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involved and the huge resources, a
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can work
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quickly
. The lecture points out in the
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some


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people
manage what the
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did and
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about that and it results in
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time consuming
.

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, according to the reading the individual team
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has a much better chance to shine to
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get
contributions and
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recognized. The lecture refutes this view by saying
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that


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sometimes
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creative
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by other
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. It leads to decrease their eagerness and decrease their
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creativity
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IELTS essay the best way to fulfill certain new projects is to create a group of people into a team

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
188 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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