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The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in the suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree? v.4

It is argued by the majority of individuals today that it is better for citizens to move into the city centre in order to address several problems. Whereas many advocate that this may result in much more effective results, I partly agree with those who oppose this idea. On the one hand, it appears indisputable that moving from rural areas into city centres can lead to decline in current traffic and pollution. This is mainly because the pace of life as well as technology has accelerated in urban areas. Those who advocate this view feel that the technological advancements seem to be the most efficient way to deal with traffic and pollution as they are able to lessen these two issues. Recycling, which has been becoming significantly common in cities, is not being held in suburbs which now means that there is much more pollution there. With regard to traffic problems, it is true that a very rapid production of automobiles is visible nowadays throughout the world that threatens the existence of humans due to pollution. In cities, however, some restrictions are made in order to deter traffic problems. Speed cameras are being installed in various areas of the city and the full weight of the law has been imposed for serious offences like polluting air. Despite the aforementioned upsides, I agree with people who are in favour of staying in suburbs and countrysides. They believe that it is of great importance to keep all places less polluted. It is not necessary to move, but every resident should make modest contribution to maintain the stable environment. For instance, it would be a great idea to involve all people in the world to plant trees. It cannot be effective unless all individuals get it serious. In conclusion, although changing accommodation has some unique merits, it seems to me that it is first essential to allocate more resources and legislate new laws to keep the safe environment.

It is argued
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today
 that it is better for citizens to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 into the city Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 in order to address several problems. Whereas Possible agreement error. The noun advocate seems to be countable; consider using: “many advocates”.many advocates
many advocate
 that this may result in much more effective results, I partly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with those who oppose this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
.

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centres
 can lead to decline in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
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traffic
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
. This is mainly
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because
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 as technology has accelerated in urban areas. Those who advocate this view feel that the technological advancements seem to be the most efficient way to deal with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
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pollution
 as they are able to lessen these two issues. Recycling, which has been becoming significantly
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cities
, is not being held
 in suburbs which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 means that there is much more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
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traffic
 problems, it is true that a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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pollution
. In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
, however
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 restrictions are made
 in order to deter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 problems. Speed cameras are being installed
 in various areas of the city and the full weight of the law has been imposed
 for serious Possible spelling mistake. ‘offences’ is British English.offenses
offences
 like polluting air.

Despite the aforementioned upsides, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are in Possible spelling mistake. ‘favour’ is British English.favor
favour
 of staying in suburbs and countrysides. They believe that it is of great importance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 all places less polluted. It is not necessary to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 every resident should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 modest contribution to maintain the stable environment. For instance
, it would be a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to involve all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the world to plant trees. It cannot be effective unless all individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it serious.

In conclusion
, although changing accommodation has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unique merits, it seems to me that it is first
 essential to allocate more resources and legislate new laws to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the safe environment. 