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The best thing I learned last year

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Since, people are born. they learn lots of things in their whole life. So I learned some things last year. But one of the best sentences I understood that life is too short. Because my granny deadl ast year. She looked after me very well and I loved her. Else, I studied journalism courses for five months and I read a lot of books for winning the competition. When I was studying this course I met some professional And famous journalists. These meetings were really brilliant for me.
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year. She looked after me
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well and I
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loved
her. Else, I studied journalism courses for five months and I read
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a lot of
books for winning the competition. When I was studying this course I met
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some
professional And
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famous
journalists. These meetings were
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brilliant for me.
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IELTS essay The best thing I learned last year

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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