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PREPARATION AND PREVENTION AGAINST NATURAL DISASTERS

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Natural disasters happen all over the world, and they can be utterly devastating for people's lives and the environments we live in; such as Volcano, Tsunami, Floods, Tornadoes, Earthquakes, . . . A natural disaster can cause loss of life or damage property, and typically leaves some economic damage in its wake. An earthquake occurs when there is an abnormal shift of the Earth's crust. Earthquakes vary in varying degrees, from mild earthquakes to more dangerous, powerful, and even deadly earthquakes in some areas. Usually secondary earthquakes will cause more severe damage such as house collapses, twins, fires, . . . The force of a volcanic eruption is extremely strong, leading to a great risk to human life. Volcanic eruptions produce lava, which can destroy any kind of structure or tree it passes through. Volcanic ash is so dangerous, it can form and become a cloud, then fall on any area. If people inhale this amount of ash, it can have a significant impact on health. Tsunamis are likely caused by underground and undersea earthquakes. Tsunamis are created by the ground with a depth of 50 meters or less. With an intensity of 8 degrees, the twin episodes began to have tremendous destruction. The shift of the seabed will likely cause water to flood into landmasses, but are produced with intensity, which can sweep anything they pass through. Prolonged heavy rains and storms are the cause of the flooding. The flash floods have left homes, gardens and forests devastated. More serious is causing rock erosion. Forest fires are a natural disaster that occurs all over the world, concentrated in areas with large forest areas, with prolonged dry weather. Wildfires have the power to destroy some or all of the composition of that forest. Forest fires have serious consequences such as: - Depletion of natural resources - Causing flooding, erosion, landslides. . . - Destroying the habitats of many species of flora and fauna, causing ecosystem imbalances. A drought is a period that lasts for several months, even years without water, in some part of the world. Drought has a strong impact on the environment, economy, politics and society, human health. Prolonged drought conditions make people's lives poorer and more backward, leading to hunger, disease, and rampant epidemics. In Vietnam, floods are a natural phenomenon that occurs every year. Every year, there are about 10-15 floods coming into Viet Nam. The middle of Vietnam is the region most affected by floods. The floods caused a lot of damage to people and people. Especially in low-lying areas, or high mountainous areas, when heavy rains persist, storms and floods occur, the soil and rocks are landslided, causing houses, houses to be severely damaged, human damage. The 2020 Central Vietnam floods have caused mass destruction. In October and early November 2020, central Vietnam got struck by three floods, four storms and a series of landslides that claimed the lives of more than 150 people and left 71 missing. Floods destroy lands, paddy fields, houses, damage the facilities of middle areas. The supply of food and goods also gets limited during floods 4. 1. The harm of natural disasters - Hindering socio-economic development. - Causing environmental consequences, adversely affecting production and life. - Consequences for national defense and security; destroying buildings, degrading national reserves, destabilizing people's lives and social order. Human actions are emitted by large volumes of greenhouse gases, which hold hot air in the Earth's atmosphere. This makes the Earth's climate change, the average temperature increases over time. Causing extreme weather events The earth's temperature rises greatly leading to droughts, floods and extreme weather phenomena (storms, tornadoes). Human actions are leading to environmental destruction and threats to our natural resources. Environmentally threatened natural resources are destroyed resulting in soil, air and water resources that should be contaminated and unsafe, destroying the habitat of animals. Planting and protecting forests, protecting the environment and nature. Build flood-regulating reservoirs in areas where flash floods often occur. Localities regularly propagate disasters and preparation measures in the media and radio speakers, . . . People should be evacuated urgently if they notice a bad weather situation, which tends to cause damage to people and their people. People need to actively learn more to better know the signs, what to do and what not to do when a natural disaster occurs. Understanding what natural disasters are and the means to deal with and prevent natural disasters will help communities and societies have a safer life.
Natural
disasters
happen all over the world, and they can be
utterly
devastating for
people
's
lives
and the environments we
live
in; such as Volcano, Tsunami,
Floods
, Tornadoes,
Earthquakes
, .
.
.


A
natural
disaster
can
cause
loss of
life
or
damage
property, and
typically
leaves
some
economic
damage
in its wake.

An
earthquake
occurs
when there is an abnormal shift of the
Earth's
crust.
Earthquakes
vary in varying degrees, from mild
earthquakes
to more
dangerous
, powerful, and even deadly
earthquakes
in
some
areas
.
Usually
secondary
earthquakes
will
cause
more severe
damage
such as
house
collapses, twins, fires
, .
.
.


The force of a volcanic eruption is
extremely
strong,
leading
to a great
risk
to human
life
. Volcanic eruptions produce lava, which can
destroy
any kind of structure or tree it passes through.

Volcanic ash is
so
dangerous
, it can form and become a cloud, then fall on any
area
. If
people
inhale this amount of ash, it can have a significant impact on health.

Tsunamis are likely caused by underground and undersea earthquakes.

Tsunamis
are created
by the ground with a depth of 50 meters or
less
.

With an intensity of 8 degrees, the twin episodes began to have tremendous destruction. The shift of the seabed will likely
cause
water to
flood
into landmasses,
but
are produced
with intensity, which can sweep anything they pass through.

Prolonged heavy rains and
storms
are the
cause
of the flooding. The flash
floods
have
left
homes, gardens and forests devastated. More serious is
causing
rock erosion.

Forest fires are a
natural
disaster
that
occurs
all over the world, concentrated in
areas
with large forest
areas
, with prolonged dry
weather
. Wildfires have the power to
destroy
some
or all of the composition of that forest.

Forest fires have serious consequences such as:

-
 Depletion of
natural
resources

-
 Causing flooding, erosion, landslides.
.
.


-
 Destroying the habitats of
many
species of flora and fauna,
causing
ecosystem imbalances.

A drought is a period that lasts for several months, even years without water, in
some
part of the world.

Drought has a strong impact on the environment, economy, politics and society, human health. Prolonged drought conditions
make
people
's
lives
poorer and more backward,
leading
to hunger, disease, and rampant epidemics.

In Vietnam,
floods
are a
natural
phenomenon that
occurs
every year. Every year, there are about 10-15
floods
coming into
Viet
Nam. The middle of Vietnam is the region most
affected
by
floods
. The
floods
caused
a lot of
damage
to
people
and
people
.
Especially
in low-lying
areas
, or high mountainous
areas
, when heavy rains persist,
storms
and
floods
occur
, the soil and rocks are
landslided
,
causing
houses
,
houses
to be
severely
damaged, human damage.

The 2020 Central Vietnam
floods
have caused mass destruction. In October and early November 2020, central Vietnam
got
struck by three
floods
, four
storms
and a series of landslides that claimed the
lives
of more than 150
people
and
left
71 missing.

Floods
destroy
lands, paddy fields,
houses
,
damage
the facilities of middle areas.

The supply of food and
goods
also
gets
limited during
floods 4
. 1. The harm of
natural
disasters

-
Hindering
socio-economic
development.

-
Causing
environmental consequences,
adversely
affecting production and life.

-
Consequences for national defense and security; destroying buildings, degrading national reserves, destabilizing
people
's
lives
and social order.

Human actions
are emitted
by large volumes of greenhouse gases, which hold hot air in the
Earth's
atmosphere. This
makes
the
Earth's
climate
change
, the average temperature increases over time.
Causing
extreme
weather
events
The
earth's
temperature rises
greatly
leading
to droughts,
floods
and extreme
weather
phenomena
(storms
, tornadoes).

Human actions are
leading
to environmental destruction and threats to our
natural
resources.

Environmentally
threatened
natural
resources are
destroyed
resulting in soil, air and water resources that should
be contaminated
and unsafe, destroying the habitat of animals.

Planting and protecting forests, protecting the environment and nature.

Build flood-regulating reservoirs in
areas
where flash
floods
often
occur.

Localities
regularly
propagate
disasters
and preparation measures in the media and radio speakers
, .
.
.


People
should
be evacuated
urgently
if they notice a
bad
weather
situation, which tends to
cause
damage
to
people
and their
people
.

People
need to
actively
learn more to better know the signs, what to do and what not to do when a
natural
disaster
occurs.

Understanding what
natural
disasters
are and the means to deal with and
prevent
natural
disasters
will
help
communities and societies have a safer
life
.
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IELTS essay PREPARATION AND PREVENTION AGAINST NATURAL DISASTERS

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