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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. q0rNr
In this competitive world, human are trying to minimize their quotidian task by relying upon innovation which in turns helps them to reduce their effort in these effectively. The prompt suggest that best ideas often comes from fervour interest in these common things. However, I mostly agrees with this stance for two reason, although I do believe it sometimes demands way too much effort and the final results does not looks as conceived. To begin with, idea coming from commonplace things have resulted in great addition to the advanced tool available to the humankind today, for performing common jobs. For instance, consider vacuum cleaner, it has helped several people to address their tedious task of cleaning their house. Probably this is one of those machines, which inventor would have thought about while cleaning his house. Though at that moment he would have though it as a simple model which could assist him, now vacuum cleaner is an integral part of our household machine. Another example would be of a watch, people earlier must be hard time predicting what time it is, or probably while assuming by what it will be dark outside, but small invention like watches have helped significantly. Furthermore, people nowadays are looking for automating an abundant number of repetitive work, they do as a part of their common job and these ideas have attracted good amount of attention as well. For instance, many corporate companies are using bot for addressing a lot of redundant question their customer used to ask. These answer were earlier provided by the human itself, who used to invest a lot more time than bot takes. Performing these common task sometimes get annoying as well and culminates in a economy where most of the people are doing banal task, which they might don’t like and creates discontentment within them as well. Although I do concede working on these ideas or innovation to make a product out of it, which eventually could serve the humankind is a tedious job and requires good amount funds as well. Quite a time it happens that, a bunch of people working toward idea don’t get any significant output at end of it. For example, many people are working on human bot who can do all the household work like any other human being, it has attracted considerable investment and still people are working on it, to make it efficient and create a working model which could cater large number of people. To conclude with, of course ideas coming out of commonplace out of passion has worked as a boon to humankind and helped us significantly reduced our effort in repetitive and redundant work, but it comes with a disadvantage of heavy investment which might marginalize a profuse number of people from using or even experiencing it usefulness.
In this competitive world,
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are trying to minimize their quotidian
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task
by relying upon innovation which in turns
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helps
them to
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reduce
their effort in these
effectively
. The prompt suggest that best
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ideas
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often
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comes
from
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fervour
interest in these
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common
things.
However
, I
mostly
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agrees
with this stance for two reason, although I do believe it
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sometimes
demands way too much effort and the final results does not
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looks
as conceived.

To
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begin
with,
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idea
coming from commonplace things have resulted in great addition to the advanced tool available to the humankind
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today
, for performing
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common
jobs.
For instance
, consider vacuum cleaner, it has
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helped
several
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people
to address their tedious
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task
of cleaning their
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house
.
Probably
this is one of those machines, which inventor would have
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thought
about while cleaning his
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house
. Though at that moment he would have though it as a simple model which could assist him,
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now
vacuum cleaner is an integral part of our household machine. Another example would be of a
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watch
,
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people
earlier
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must
be
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hard
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time
predicting what
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time
it is, or
probably
while assuming by what it will be dark outside,
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but
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small
invention like
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watches
have
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helped
significantly
.

Furthermore
,
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people
nowadays are looking for automating an abundant number of repetitive work, they do as a part of their
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common
job and these
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ideas
have attracted
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good
amount of attention
as well
.
For instance
,
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many
corporate
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companies
are using bot for addressing
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a lot of
redundant question their customer
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used
to ask. These answer were earlier provided by the
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human
itself, who
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used
to invest a lot more
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time
than bot takes. Performing these
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common
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task
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sometimes
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get
annoying
as well
and culminates in
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a
economy where most of the
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people
are doing banal
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task
, which they might don’t like and creates discontentment within them
as well
.

Although I do concede
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working
on these
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ideas
or innovation to
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make
a product out of it, which
eventually
could serve the humankind is a tedious job and requires
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good
amount funds
as well
. Quite a
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time
it happens that, a bunch of
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people
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working
toward
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idea
don’t
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get
any significant output at
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end
of it.
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,
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many
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people
are
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working
on
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human
bot who can do all the household work like any other
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human
being, it has attracted considerable investment and
still
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people
are
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working
on it, to
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make
it efficient and create a
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working
model which could cater large number of
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people
.

To conclude
with,
of course
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ideas
coming out of commonplace out of passion has worked as a boon to humankind and
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helped
us
significantly
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reduced
our effort in repetitive and redundant work,
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but
it
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comes
with a disadvantage of heavy investment which might marginalize a profuse number of
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people
from using or even experiencing it usefulness.
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IELTS essay The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
469 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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