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Indian cars and their family

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Indian is the country where all type of humans lives together with happiness and joyful and celebrate fastivel together Indian people are crazy about cars even child to old all generation have same base and same love towards our cars Nowdays people love SUV. In India people judging their status with their cars if a human have old generation cars than society don’t gave them a good response in northern india almost 80 percent of human use suv for their daily use We can saw a different fan base in Indians for their vehicles they modified their vehicles in the half of their cost
Indian is the country where all type of humans
lives
together with happiness and joyful and celebrate
fastivel
together Indian
people
are crazy about
cars
even child to
old
all generation have same base and same
love
towards our
cars
Nowdays
people
love
SUV. In India
people
judging their status with their
cars
if a human have
old
generation
cars
than society don’t gave them a
good
response in northern
india
almost 80 percent of human
use
suv
for their daily
use
We can
saw
a
different
fan base in Indians for their vehicles they modified their vehicles in the half of their
cost
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IELTS essay Indian cars and their family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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