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The benefits of the internet

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Nowadays the internet takes a vital role in peoples life and it is essential in numerous areas. For instance, it simplifies our daily duties and lifestyle. I strongly agree that the internet makes human lives better and convenient. Firstly, there are many various schools and universities that have already changed their traditional way of studying into virtual. The internet is used to provide connection between students and teachers, The availability of the internet lets scholars study remote and spend less time on studying at schools. In addition to this the internet helps undergraduates learn new theories and materials, they are able to explore new information by their phones or computers only using the internet. For instance, recent situation with COVID-19 forced students to study isolated and only by the internet they were able to continue their studies and absorbing new knowledge. Secondly, the internet has simplified the way of getting information. The Internet gives an opportunity to find any kind of data and it is not necessary to have permission to find out it. The internet allows people to find some historical facts or discover working hours of any restaurants. Using the internet people can develop themselves by studying or reading books online. For instance, there are several websites where people share their knowledge with others or you can find special courses and develop yourself on the own. If you are fond of cooking you can easily find many various websites or videos that can easily help cook something that you have never tried. The benefits of the internet are unmatched. The internet has changed peoples ways of living, making it more convenient. It helps students study and helps ordinary people with their daily duties
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life and it is essential in numerous areas.
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various schools and universities that have already
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connection between
students and teachers, The availability of the internet
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lets
scholars
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study
remote and spend less time on studying at schools.
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to this the internet
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helps
undergraduates learn new theories and materials, they are able to explore new information by their phones or computers
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only
using the internet.
For instance
, recent situation with COVID-19 forced students to
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study
isolated and
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only
by the internet they were able to continue their
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studies
and absorbing new knowledge.

Secondly
, the internet has simplified the way of getting information. The Internet gives an opportunity to
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find
any kind of data and it is not necessary to have permission to
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out it. The internet
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allows
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people
to
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historical facts or discover working hours of any restaurants. Using the internet
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people
can develop themselves by studying or reading books online.
For instance
, there are several websites where
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people
share their knowledge with others or you can
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find
special courses and develop yourself on the
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own
. If you are fond of cooking you can
easily
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find
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many
various websites or videos that can
easily
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cook something that you have never tried.

The benefits of the internet
are unmatched
. The internet has
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changed
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peoples
ways of living, making it more convenient. It
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helps
students
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study
and
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helps
ordinary
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people
with their daily
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duties
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IELTS essay The benefits of the internet

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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