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Internet is not a safe place.

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Have you ever been bullied online or know someone who has been? No one should experience something like this, it is truly horribly horrifying and can mess with your mental and physical health. The internet isn’t even close to safe, there are hackers, spammers, stalkers and generally mean people around every corner ready to attack you. Some of these people online try to harass you mentally which can effect on your physical and mental health. The first reason to why the internet isn’t safe is, because there are a lot of people out there and you don’t know everyone. There are some people out there who don’t have good intentions, the most common of these are hackers, stalkers, spammers and generally mean people. Sometimes these type of people can harass you and abuse you verbally and sometime physically. Some people hack your phone find your location and trick you. They could end up kidnapping you or hurting you really badly. They could spam you and hack your accounts and start stealing your money.
Have you ever
been bullied
online or know someone who has been? No one should experience something like this, it is
truly
horribly
horrifying and can mess with your mental and physical health. The internet isn’t even close to safe, there are hackers, spammers, stalkers and
generally
mean
people
around every corner ready to attack you.
Some
of these
people
online try to harass you mentally which can effect on your physical and mental health.

The
first
reason to why the internet isn’t safe is,
because
there are
a lot of
people
out there and you don’t know everyone. There are
some
people
out there who don’t have
good
intentions, the most common of these are hackers, stalkers, spammers and
generally
mean
people
.
Sometimes
these type of
people
can harass you and abuse you
verbally
and sometime
physically
.
Some
people
hack your phone find your location and trick you. They could
end
up kidnapping you or hurting you
really
badly
. They could spam you and hack your accounts and
start
stealing your money.
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IELTS essay Internet is not a safe place.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
173 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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