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The benefit(s) of non-academic subjects such as sports and music

The benefit(s) of non-academic subjects such as sports and music 2rA2j

It is beneficial for students to learning non-academic subjects. To begin with, extra-curricular education helps fully develop learners’ characters. This is because these subjects equip students with good morals before being faced with real-life situations. In addition, non-academic subjects give students some entertaining moments after intense classes. As a result, it enables schoolchildren to perform more effectively in the next academic class. For instance, students attending a music session can easily relieve stress and prepare a clear mind for later sections just by listening and singing along to favorite songs

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