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Few people think that sports play a significant role in society while few think that it is for leisure time. Sports play an important role in society. Many sports persons represent the nation and play sports. Eventually, when a sports person wins it is declared as the nation wins. Also, sport’s person can be an ambassador for many advertisements which can lead an increase in product sales. Nevertheless, there are people who think that sports considered being leisure. When people find free time; they play sports and thinks that it can be useful for their recreation as well as a physical exercise. They also have a mindset that sports are useless and time waste.

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