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The benefits of animals to human lives

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Most of us know that animals play an essential role in our life, and they are considered a gift from nature to us. We can see that animals can bring a lot of benefits to human life. First and foremost, animals are supposed to be good companions. We can see that many families keep dogs, cats, and parrots as pets, which helps improve their mood and health. A study conducted by AAHA (American Animal Hospital Association) found that more than 90% of pet owners believe that having a pet can make them happier, healthier, less stressed, and more efficient at work. Mainly, working from home amid the COVID-19 pandemic, they help make the somewhat dull days more colorful. On the other hand, we can notice that animals are also perfect caregivers. Some people, especially experts, train dogs to assist people with disabilities, such as guiding the blind and alerting the deaf. Therefore, we can see animals as close companions. One more thing that I find necessary is that animals serve humans as sources of supply. They provide a source of livelihood, food, and entertainment such as milk, eggs for selling, eating, or sports. In conclusion, animals make a pretty significant contribution to human life.
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play an essential role in our life, and they
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see
that
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can bring
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a lot of
benefits to human life.
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and foremost,
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animals
are supposed
to be
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good
companions. We can
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see
that
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many
families
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dogs, cats, and parrots as pets, which
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helps
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their mood and health. A study conducted by
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AAHA
(American
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Animal
Hospital Association) found that more than 90% of pet owners believe that having a pet can
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make
them happier, healthier, less
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stressed
, and more efficient at work.
Mainly
, working from home amid the COVID-19 pandemic, they
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help
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make
the somewhat dull days more colorful.

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, we can notice that
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animals
are
also
perfect caregivers.
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Some
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people
,
especially
experts, train dogs to assist
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people
with disabilities, such as guiding the blind and alerting the deaf.
Therefore
, we can
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see
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animals
as close companions. One more thing that I find necessary is that
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animals
serve humans as sources of supply. They provide a source of livelihood, food, and entertainment such as milk, eggs for selling, eating, or sports.
In conclusion
,
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animals
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make
a pretty significant contribution to human life.
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IELTS essay The benefits of animals to human lives

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
204 words
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