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the bar illustrate the different kinds of English's selection in housing for vaction in 2010 Overall, the production of petro declined moderately in the years 1995 - 2005. While coal and gas energy making increased slightly and still made up most of the output between 1995 and 2005. In 1995 France produced 29, 80% coal power, this figure rose approximately 1% ten years later. In the same way, France’s gas output grew slowly and accounted for almost a third through a decade from 1995. The majority of France's energy generation was coal and gas over the 10-year period. Apart from these top two considerations, petro power produced in 1995 made up less than a third of total output, higher than the petro production in the next ten years by almost 10%. Whereas, France in 1995 made less nuclear energy than those in 2005s, at 6, 4% and 10, 1%, respectively. The quantity of other energy was nearly one in twenty in 1995, about half of 2005 production.

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1995 - 2005
. While coal and gas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 making increased slightly
 and still
 made up most of the output between 1995 and 2005.

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, France’s gas output grew slowly
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energy
 generation was coal and gas over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
10-year
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petro
 power produced in 1995 made up less than a third of total output, higher than the Possible spelling mistake found.metroPedroretroPetrapetrolPietro
petro
 production in the next
 ten years by almost 10%. Whereas, France in 1995 made less nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 than those in 2005s, at 6, 4% and 10, 1%, respectively
. The quantity of other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 was nearly
 one in twenty in 1995, about half of 2005 production. 