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The bar chart gives the proportion of export earnings for different product category for the years 2015 and 2016. while table compares the percentage of exported product. The scale is in billions. the export earning for Overall, it can be seen that petroleum product, engineered goods and textiles was increased. whereas, Gems and Jewellery and agricultural showed negative trend. Textiles Major changes occurred in textile product. To begin with, Petroleum products accounted for so billions dollars which slightly went up to 62 billions dollar in 2016. In the same way, engineered goods and Textiles were at S5 billions dollar and 25 billions Products remained with Same amount. However, Gems and jewellbay hud 42 billions dollar, which decreased to 40 billions dollar respectively. These amounts grew Bin 2016 and reached at 62 and 32 billions dollars. In ag. Agricultural products remained with same amount. However, gems and jewellery had 42 billions dollar, which declined to 40 billions dollar. Moreover, Textiles shows the highest differences, 15. 247. Engineered goods & the rate of engineered goods increased by 8. 5%. compared to 2015. Similarly, Petroleum products and Agricultural products also represent upward trend. Although, merely Gems and jewellery shows a downward trend. It declined by 5. 18% in 2016 compared to 2015.
The bar chart gives the proportion of export earnings for
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IELTS essay the bar chart represents amount of export earning.

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