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With the Massa take only 10% of them knew any Spanish at all

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With the Massa take only 10% of them knew any Spanish at all, even to tell you the name of their town and how to get to the next one. The problem for them to learn to use Spanish well was they had no one to talk to. How long would it take them to learn enough Spanish to profit spiritually? Just an example of their attitude toward the language during the war. The Mexican government heard a rumor that Germans had infiltrated Mexico and were setting up a base in northern Mexico to attack the United States. Mexican soldiers were sent out to check on every non-Mexican in the area, who he was, what he was doing there, and so on. We were out there. We are almost oblivious to the war out there because we didn't get news.
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use
Spanish well was they had no one to talk to. How long would it take them to learn
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enough
Spanish to profit
spiritually
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an example of their attitude toward the language during the war. The Mexican
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government
heard a rumor that Germans had infiltrated Mexico and were setting up a base in northern Mexico to attack the United States. Mexican soldiers were
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sent
out to
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check
on every non-Mexican in the area, who he was, what he was doing there, and
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so
on. We were
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there. We are almost oblivious to the war out there
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IELTS essay With the Massa take only 10% of them knew any Spanish at all

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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