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why unpaid internship should be banned

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The goal of an internship should be to mutually benefit both the intern and the company. It is actually my belief that internships are a way for companies to give back and any internships offered should disproportionately benefit the intern, providing them training, connections, and confidence to move forward to their next opportunities. This is particularly true if the internship is not paid. Internships should not fill permanent requirements… They should be seasonal. They should be transitional. The goal should be to equip the intern with skills and knowledge that will aid them in their future endeavors. Another goal could be for the intern to learn more about a specific role or function before deciding if they fully want to commit themselves to a career in that area.
The goal of an internship should be to
mutually
benefit both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
intern
and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. It is actually my belief that internships are a way for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to give back and any internships offered should
disproportionately
benefit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
intern
, providing them training, connections, and confidence to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward to their
next
opportunities. This is
particularly
true if the internship is not paid. Internships should not fill permanent requirements… They should be seasonal. They should be transitional. The goal should be to equip the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
intern
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and knowledge that will aid them in their future endeavors. Another goal could be for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
intern
to learn more about a specific role or function
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
deciding if they
fully
want to commit themselves to a career in that area.
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IELTS essay why unpaid internship should be banned

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