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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in the USA over four seasons in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in the USA over four seasons in 2019. APJJL

The bar chart gives information about how much money that variety of goods were sold over a course of four seasons, Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter in 2019. As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that clothing was completely the best seller over the period in the year. While garden tended to be left-over with the figure fell off by year. In Spring, goods of clothing was in the first place in sales with 100000 millions of pounds. Meanwhile, Household, Garden and Electrical equipment were 80000, 40000 and 60000 Millions of pounds respectively. In the next two seasons, there were not much changes when clothing still remained in the first place with the sales of 80000 Millions of pounds in Summer, fell slightly 20000 Millions compared to the previous season. The sales of household, Garden and Electrical equipment went down a little bit by about 10000 Millions in Summer. The sales of three goods gradually fell in the next season but the order did not change much. In the end of the period, Clothing rose up dramatically wtih the sales of 150000 Millions of Pounds. While, Household, Garden and Electrical equipment were 50000, 20000, 80000 Millions of Pounds respectively.

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goods
were sold
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seasons
, Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter in 2019.

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seen
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best seller
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While
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garden
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left
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goods
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sales
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millions
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.

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much
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changes
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sales
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goods
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season
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but
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end
 of the period, Clothing rose up dramatically
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sales
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Millions
 of Pounds. While, Household, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
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. 