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The bar chart describes the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin in ten years

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The bar chart describes the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin in ten years. Over ten years period, the number of adopted dogs decreases from 1990 to 1994 and then remains steadily later on. On the other hand, the number of adopted cats increase gradually from 1990 to 2000 whereas the number of birds and reptiles adoptions fluctuate constantly over times. Specifically, from 1990 to 1992, the number of adopted birds and reptiles falls from over a hundred to below a hundred but it raises to a hundred again from 1992 to 1994. Furthermore, the fluctuation still continue when it raises gradually to over a hundred from 1994 to 1996 and then falls below that same amount from 1996 to 1998. Eventually, it reaches a hundred of adopted birds and reptiles from 1990 to 2000. In conclusion, as the chart illustrates, the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin from 1990 to 2000 is very diversified. Each feature has its own separate change and still continue to change over times
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animals
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adopted
from an
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animal
rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin in ten years.
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Over
ten years period, the
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number
of
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adopted
dogs decreases from 1990 to 1994 and then remains
steadily
later on.
On the other hand
, the
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number
of
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adopted
cats increase
gradually
from 1990 to 2000 whereas the
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number
of birds and reptiles adoptions fluctuate
constantly
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over
times.
Specifically
, from 1990 to 1992, the
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number
of
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adopted
birds and reptiles falls from
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over
a hundred to below a hundred
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it raises to a hundred again from 1992 to 1994.
Furthermore
, the fluctuation
still
continue when it raises
gradually
to
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over
a hundred from 1994 to 1996 and then falls below that same amount from 1996 to 1998.
Eventually
, it reaches a hundred of
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adopted
birds and reptiles from 1990 to 2000.
In conclusion
, as the chart illustrates, the
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number
of
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animals
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adopted
from an
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animal
rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin from 1990 to 2000 is
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very
diversified. Each feature has its
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separate
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change
and
still
continue to
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change
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IELTS essay The bar chart describes the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin in ten years

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  American English
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180 words
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