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The bar chart below shows the of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The bar chart below shows the of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
NOWADAYS DESPITE NUMEROUS BELIEVES THAT EMPLOYERS SHOULD USE CHARACTER AS A YARDSTICK FOR MEASURING COMPETENCE REGARDLESS OF EXPERTISE, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT YEARS SPENT AND SPECIATLY IS THE MOST IMPORTANT CRITERIA IN CHOOSING WORKERS. TO START WITH, MANY WORKING ASSIGNMENTS ARE VERY COMPLEX AND TAKES SPECIAL TRAINING TO SOLVE, THAT EXPERTS HAVE BEEN SEEN TO CONFESS THAT IT TAKES A PLETHORA OF TECHNICAL SKILLS TO MANEOVRE THE MOST MINUTE OF TASK. WHILE, IN A WORKING ENVIRONMENT PERSONAL TRAITS ARE GREAT FOR SOCIALIZATION IT CAN NOT BE IMPLEMENTED DURING PROBLEM SOLVING. CONVERSELY, HAVING A BROAD KNOWLEDGE OR TECHNIQUE OF AN AREA OR SPECIALTY GETS THINGS DONE. LOOKING BACK AT A RECENT SURVEY DONE IN CANADA, DUE TO ALOT OF COMPLAINS ABOUT TOXICITY AMONGST HOSPITAL STAFF, THE CHIEF SURGEON DECIDED TO EMPLOY SOME CHARISMATIC DOCTORS AND LAID OFF THE EXPERTS. AS A RESULT, THERE WERE REPORTS OF HIGHER RATES OF MORBIDITY THAT YEAR THAN EVER IN THE HISTORY OF THE CLINIC. ANOTHER POINT TO CONSIDER IS THE FACT THAT EXPERIENCE COMES WITH ALOT OF PECKS LIKE MASTERING AND WISDOM. IT IS OBSERVED THAT WHEN A PERSON IS CONSTANTLY EXPOSED TO THE SAME ASSIGNMENT HE BECOMES ACCUSTOMED TO IT, AN INTERESTING EXPLANATION IS A REPORT BY SCIENTIST THAT SAY, FREQUENTLY INDULGING IN A LABOUR OR VENTURE MAKES KEEN THE AREA OF THE BRAIN THAT CONTROLS THAT FUNCTION RESULTING IN ONES ABILITY TO EVEN DO IT IN THEIR SLEEP. IN ADDITION, PRIOR TO ONES ATTAINMENT OF A DEGREE IN AN AREA, THERE ARE PROCESSES OF DRILLING THAT INVOLVES THE INTRINSIC AND EXTRINSIC DETAILS OF THAT JOB, MAKING ONE A PROFESSIONAL. IN CONCLUSION, IN AS MUCH AS PERSONALITY TRAIT IS SEEN TO BE MORE IMPORTANT BY SOME IN EMPLOYING WORKERS, I BELIEVE THAT CAPABILITY AND WORKING EXPERIENCE ARE STANDARD CRITERION FOR JOB EMPLOYMENT.
NOWADAYS DESPITE NUMEROUS
BELIEVES
THAT EMPLOYERS SHOULD
USE
CHARACTER AS A YARDSTICK FOR MEASURING COMPETENCE REGARDLESS OF EXPERTISE, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT YEARS SPENT AND
SPECIATLY
IS THE MOST
IMPORTANT
CRITERIA IN CHOOSING WORKERS.

TO
START
WITH,
MANY
WORKING ASSIGNMENTS ARE
VERY
COMPLEX AND TAKES SPECIAL TRAINING TO SOLVE, THAT EXPERTS HAVE BEEN
SEEN
TO CONFESS THAT IT TAKES A PLETHORA OF TECHNICAL
SKILLS
TO
MANEOVRE
THE MOST MINUTE OF TASK. WHILE, IN A WORKING ENVIRONMENT PERSONAL TRAITS ARE GREAT FOR SOCIALIZATION IT CAN NOT
BE IMPLEMENTED
DURING PROBLEM SOLVING.
CONVERSELY
, HAVING A BROAD KNOWLEDGE OR TECHNIQUE OF AN AREA OR SPECIALTY
GETS
THINGS DONE. LOOKING BACK AT A RECENT SURVEY DONE IN CANADA, DUE TO
ALOT
OF
COMPLAINS
ABOUT TOXICITY AMONGST HOSPITAL STAFF, THE CHIEF SURGEON DECIDED TO EMPLOY
SOME
CHARISMATIC DOCTORS AND LAID OFF THE EXPERTS.
AS A RESULT
, THERE WERE REPORTS OF HIGHER RATES OF MORBIDITY THAT YEAR THAN EVER IN THE HISTORY OF THE CLINIC.

ANOTHER POINT TO CONSIDER IS THE FACT THAT EXPERIENCE
COMES
WITH
ALOT
OF PECKS LIKE MASTERING AND WISDOM. IT
IS OBSERVED
THAT WHEN A PERSON IS
CONSTANTLY
EXPOSED TO THE SAME ASSIGNMENT HE BECOMES ACCUSTOMED TO IT, AN INTERESTING EXPLANATION IS A REPORT BY SCIENTIST THAT SAY,
FREQUENTLY
INDULGING IN A
LABOUR
OR VENTURE
MAKES
KEEN THE AREA OF THE BRAIN THAT CONTROLS THAT FUNCTION RESULTING IN
ONES
ABILITY TO EVEN DO IT IN THEIR SLEEP.
IN ADDITION
, PRIOR TO
ONES
ATTAINMENT OF A DEGREE IN AN AREA, THERE ARE PROCESSES OF DRILLING THAT INVOLVES THE INTRINSIC AND EXTRINSIC
DETAILS
OF THAT JOB, MAKING ONE A PROFESSIONAL.

IN CONCLUSION
, IN AS MUCH AS PERSONALITY TRAIT IS
SEEN
TO BE MORE
IMPORTANT
BY
SOME
IN EMPLOYING WORKERS, I BELIEVE THAT CAPABILITY AND WORKING EXPERIENCE ARE STANDARD CRITERION FOR JOB EMPLOYMENT.
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IELTS essay The bar chart below shows the of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
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