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The Bach Ma Temple is the oldest Buddhist temple in Hanoi.

The Bach Ma Temple is the oldest Buddhist temple in Hanoi. M3L2N
Bach Ma Temple is the oldest Buddhist temple in Hanoi. It built in 9th century by King Ly Thai To, originally based on Long Do Mountain. It moved to the Old Quater in 18th century. The story behind is at first, he king couldn't build the citadel. When he prayed, he saw a white horse coming out the Long Do temple. The king then built the citadel on the horse's marked tracks, it changed the name from Long Do temple to Bach Ma temple
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is the oldest Buddhist
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in Hanoi. It built in 9th century by King
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a white horse coming out the Long Do
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. The king then built the citadel on the horse's marked
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, it
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to Bach Ma
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IELTS essay The Bach Ma Temple is the oldest Buddhist temple in Hanoi.

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  American English
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