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The avocado Oil Extraction process

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The avocado will be collected and sorted for rotten fruits which are being done with human interaction. The fruit will be cleaned thoroughly by using a washer and cleaned fruit will be put into a crusher which will sort the flesh, skin, and seeds. The blended avocado fluid will be directed to stage 1 centrifuge which eliminates the solids at a temperature level of a maximum of 45-50c, from the liquid and the 2nd stage of centrifuge will be extracting the oil while eliminating the wastewater from the processes. Meanwhile the by-products of the oil extraction process, the rotten fruit, seeds, skins, and solid waste will be return back to the orchards as fertilizers. Ultimately the oil will be funneled through a funnel and filtered clarified a filtration process and the end products will be bottled for the market
The avocado will
be collected
and sorted for rotten
fruits
which are
being done
with human interaction. The
fruit
will
be cleaned
thoroughly
by using a washer and cleaned
fruit
will
be put
into a crusher which will sort the flesh, skin, and seeds.
The
blended avocado fluid will
be directed
to stage 1 centrifuge which eliminates the solids at a temperature level of a maximum of 45-50c, from the liquid and the 2nd stage of centrifuge will be extracting the oil while eliminating the wastewater from the processes.
Meanwhile
the by-products of the oil extraction process, the rotten
fruit
, seeds, skins, and solid waste will be
return back
to the orchards as fertilizers.
Ultimately
the oil will
be funneled
through a funnel and filtered clarified a filtration process and the
end
products will
be bottled
for the
market

IELTS essay The avocado Oil Extraction process

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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