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The avocado Oil Extraction process

The avocado Oil Extraction process Yd0NK

The avocado will be collected and sorted for rotten fruits which are being done with human interaction. The fruit will be cleaned thoroughly by using a washer and cleaned fruit will be put into a crusher which will sort the flesh, skin, and seeds. The blended avocado fluid will be directed to stage 1 centrifuge which eliminates the solids at a temperature level of a maximum of 45-50c, from the liquid and the 2nd stage of centrifuge will be extracting the oil while eliminating the wastewater from the processes. Meanwhile the by-products of the oil extraction process, the rotten fruit, seeds, skins, and solid waste will be return back to the orchards as fertilizers. Ultimately the oil will be funneled through a funnel and filtered clarified a filtration process and the end products will be bottled for the market

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fruit
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thoroughly
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fruit
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 blended avocado fluid will be directed
 to stage 1 centrifuge which eliminates the solids at a temperature level of a maximum of 45-50c, from the liquid and the 2nd stage of centrifuge will be extracting the oil while eliminating the wastewater from the processes. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
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fruit
, seeds, skins, and solid waste will be Consider using "return".return
return back
 to the orchards as fertilizers. Ultimately
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 through a funnel and filtered clarified a filtration process and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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