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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. with this statement? pRJKd
People need to be more slowly with they want to have a health life in the future. However, is not easy to slow dow in a word where everything is rushing. On this essay i will show why i agree with that question. word is running, more and more 24 hours is not enogth for a peson to do everithing they planed for next day, people are sleeping lees and working more time. The real food noe gave sapve for fast food, the gym moved for online plataforms so you have more time to do your exercise at home, work any time. family is always in second planed, for exemplo, to visit your parents even with they live close to you need to by with appoitement in advance. People are not leaving they are running in contrast of the time. Shoud be great if we have more time but is not true, in consequent humans are getting more sick with many issue, the mental health is afected and the farmaceutic industry making more money with sleeping pills, with groups you heard more about anxiet and Tv are doinf more advertise for that person. In conclusion peolpe should organise more and planing they life more simple, everyone is running for make money end have a good life but they are forgoten to live now. Planing life, living with less and working step by step cold be great to slow dow and get more livines on future.
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People
need to be more
slowly
with they want to have a health
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
in the future.
However
, is not easy to slow
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dow
in a word where everything is rushing. On this essay
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
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show
why
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with that question.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
word
is running, more and more 24 hours is not
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enogth
for a
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peson
to do
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everithing
they planed for
next
day,
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people
are sleeping lees and working more time. The real food
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noe
gave
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sapve
for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food, the gym
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moved
for online
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plataforms
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you have more time to do your exercise at home, work any time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
family
is always in second planed, for
Possible spelling mistake found.
exemplo
, to visit your parents even with they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
close to you need to
Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?
by
with
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appoitement
in advance.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
are not leaving they are running
in contrast
of the time.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Shoud
be great if we have more time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
is not true, in consequent humans are getting more sick with
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many issue
, the mental health is
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afected
and the
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farmaceutic
industry making more money with sleeping pills, with groups you heard more about
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anxiet
and
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Tv
are
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doinf
more advertise for that person.

In conclusion
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peolpe
should
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organise
more and planing they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
more simple, everyone is running for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
money
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they are
Possible spelling mistake found.
forgoten
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

Planing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
, living with less and working step by step
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
be great to slow
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dow
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more
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livines
on future.
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IELTS essay The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. with this statement?

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6 paragraphs
245 words
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