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Describe a person who wear unusual cloths

Describe a person who wear unusual cloths VBQwm
I am fashion click and I love to wear different type of clothes and so that I have different type of outfits in my home but sometime peoples real unusual clothes for watch unique so here I would like to talk about one of my friend who wear unusual clothes actually now a days he is living in Canada but we study together in secondary and primary school so one of my friend who invited me invited for a birthday party and you all the friends went to the party and all the people in the party wear well dressed and they wear formal dress and paper bag so when my friend is come Heera deviate unusual clothes and hi we're here and extremely give a lower and extremely
I am fashion click and I
love
to
wear
different
type of
clothes
and
so
that I have
different
type of outfits in my home
but
sometime peoples real unusual
clothes
for
watch
unique
so
here I would like to talk about one of my
friend
who
wear
unusual
clothes
actually
now a days
he is living in Canada
but
we study together in secondary and primary school
so
one of my
friend
who invited me invited for a birthday party and you all the
friends
went to the party and all the
people
in the party
wear
well dressed
and they
wear
formal dress and paper bag
so
when my
friend
is
come
Heera
deviate unusual
clothes
and hi we're here and
extremely
give a lower and
extremely
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IELTS essay Describe a person who wear unusual cloths

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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