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The average condition of public health is likely to deteriorate in the future as compared to the current situation.

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The average condition of public health is likely to deteriorate in the future as compared to the current situation. I am in complete disagreement with this statement. This essay itntends to explore this topic and give relevant examples pertaining to this topic. The future is likely to see tremendous improvement in technology, specially in artificial intelligences and bio-hacking. With the development of such marvelous tools, we may be able to live much longer. Atypical stories related to transhumanism and biohacking is making the headlines every now and then. Such fields provide an avenue to scientists, who can make use of micro-robots to prevent diseases and even improve the happiness index of people by tenfold. These groundbreaking discovery imparts a sense of relief to all of us. It aches our heart to see humans dying because of curable diseases in third world countries. The goverment appointed bodies, in developing countries, are trying to tackle this issue with a sense of militant tenacity. We have seen a rise in microbiology researches, which are using insects found in nature to find cure for terminating dieases. Aspiration from nature and with the utilization of genetic code tracker, we may actually be able to defeat these diseases. Perhaps while tackling such diseases, we may find methods to improve our general well being. The schools are preaching yoga and martial arts to the students, which will help them approach life with a sense of equanimity. One might still argue that majority of problems of a modern man arises from being divorced from nature and with this continued trend of isolation, we may all become depressed. There are ruthless organizations which are hell bent on disrupting this planet and capatalizing on natural resources. Looking at such aspects of this problem makes our heart scald with fear. I would rather be a hopeless optimistic and pray for betterment of our species than to be succumed by fear. I belive that there are genuinely talented and altruist type people living among us, who can shape a better future for us and improve the health condition of the people.
The average condition of public health is likely to deteriorate in the future as compared to the
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current
situation. I am in complete disagreement with this statement. This essay
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itntends
to explore this topic and give relevant examples pertaining to this topic.

The future is likely to
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see
tremendous improvement in technology,
specially
in artificial intelligences and bio-hacking. With the development of such marvelous tools, we may be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
much longer. Atypical stories related to
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transhumanism
and biohacking is making the headlines every
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now
and then. Such fields provide an avenue to scientists, who can
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make
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use
of micro-robots to
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prevent
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diseases
and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the happiness index of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
by tenfold. These groundbreaking discovery imparts a sense of relief to all of us. It aches our heart to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
humans dying
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because
of curable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
in third world countries. The
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goverment
appointed bodies, in
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developing countries
, are trying to tackle this issue with a sense of militant tenacity.

We have
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seen
a rise in microbiology researches, which are using insects found in nature to find cure for terminating
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dieases
. Aspiration from nature and with the utilization of genetic code tracker, we may actually be able to defeat these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
. Perhaps while tackling such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
, we may find methods to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our general
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well being
. The schools are preaching yoga and martial arts to the students, which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them approach life with a sense of equanimity.

One might
still
argue that majority of problems of a modern
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
arises from
being divorced
from nature and with this continued trend of isolation, we may all become depressed. There are ruthless organizations which are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
hell bent
on disrupting this planet and
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capatalizing
on natural resources. Looking at such aspects of this problem
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
our heart scald with fear.

I would
rather
be a hopeless optimistic and pray for betterment of our species than to be
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succumed
by fear.
Did you mean "I believe"?
I belive
that there are
genuinely
talented and altruist type
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living among us, who can shape a better future for us and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the health condition of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
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IELTS essay The average condition of public health is likely to deteriorate in the future as compared to the current situation.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
349 words
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