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academic and activities participation in high school

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Owen is extremely good in academics and actively participates in all co-curricular activities from the Physics and Social Studies OSN team, a Member of Santa Laurensia’s supporters. He always has a big role in every activity that he does, for example in Santa Laurensia’s arts, music, and soccer team, as well as the community service of tutoring and donation in February 2020. He also has won many activity certificates from academic and non-academic competitions. His academic achievements include Participant in Business Model Canvas Competition (2021), Semifinalist in IRGL: Informatics Rally Games and Logic (2021). And for the non-academic competition, he managed to win several soccer competitions from being the runner-up in the Coca-cola soccer competition, runner-up in Santa Laurenisa’s cup, and also third place in Binus cup soccer competition. It surely indicates that he can work in a team and have a responsible personality.

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