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The article introduces Chevalier de Seingalt memoirs.

The article introduces Chevalier de Seingalt memoirs. More specifically, the author discusses how inaccuarte this memoirs are. The lecturer in the listening disagrees. He believes that the memoirs are correct and one of the most reliable historical source. In the reading, the writer begins by stating that Chevalier was not wealthy since he was in need of money and that the evidence showed that he borrowed an ample amount of money from a Swiss merchant. The lecturer, however, disagrees with this viewpoint. He believes taking a loan from the merchant does not mean that he was poor. He acually had properties that he sold to get money and that it takes time to convert it into cash. Therefore in this period he ran out of money and that explains why he borrowed money. The writer also claims that the conversations that was held between Chevalier and the famous writer Voltaire is not that accuarte and that it is impossible to remember the exact phrases and words. Again, the lecturer believes there are flaws in the writer's argumet. He states that Chevalier used to write everything they talked about and kept them so that he can refer to them later and the people who lived with him confirmed that. Another reason why the writer feels that Chevalier is more likely to escape the prison by the help of his political friends who could free him by giving bribes and not through a hole in the ceiling as mentioned in the memoir. The lecturer is doubtful that this is accuarte. He suggest that other prisoners had more powerful friends and could not escape and that bribe could be hard in his case. He goes on to say that after Chevalier escape the ceiling of the cell he was in have been repaired which shows that he acually escaped through the hole in the ceiling. To sum up, both the writer and professor hold conflicting views about the accuracy of Chevalier de Seingalt memoirs. It's clear they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
The article introduces Chevalier de Seingalt
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memoirs
. More
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, the author discusses how
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inaccuarte
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this
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memoirs
are.

The
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lecturer
in the listening disagrees. He believes that the
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memoirs
are correct and one of the most reliable historical source.

In the reading, the
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writer
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begins
by stating that Chevalier was not wealthy since he was in need of
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money
and that the evidence
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showed
that he borrowed

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an
ample amount of
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money
from a Swiss merchant. The
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lecturer
,
however
, disagrees with this viewpoint. He believes taking a loan from the merchant
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does


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not
mean that he was poor. He
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acually
had properties that he sold to
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get
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money
and that it takes time to convert it into cash.
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Therefore
in this period

he ran out of
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money
and that
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explains
why he borrowed money.

The
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writer
also
claims that the conversations that
was held
between Chevalier and the
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famous
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writer
Voltaire is not that
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accuarte
and that it is impossible

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to
remember the exact phrases and words. Again, the
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lecturer
believes there are flaws in the writer's
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argumet
. He states that Chevalier
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used
to write

everything they talked about and
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kept
them
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so
that he can refer to them later and the
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people
who
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lived
with him confirmed that.

Another reason why the
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writer
feels that Chevalier is more likely to escape the prison by the
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help
of his political friends who could free him by giving

bribes and not through a hole in the ceiling as mentioned in the
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memoir
. The
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lecturer
is doubtful that this is
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accuarte
. He
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suggest
that other
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prisoners


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had
more powerful friends and could not escape and that bribe could be
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hard
in his case. He goes on to say that after Chevalier escape the ceiling
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of


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the
cell he was in have
been repaired
which
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shows
that he
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acually
escaped through the hole in the ceiling.

To sum up, both the
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writer
and professor hold conflicting views about the accuracy of Chevalier de Seingalt
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memoirs
. It's
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clear
they will have trouble

finding common ground on this issue.
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IELTS essay The article introduces Chevalier de Seingalt memoirs.

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
343 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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