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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework? Do you agree or diagree?

I am fully agreed with the above context of the statement that parents should definitely spend more time instilling their children's homework for grooming purposes and flourish the child's ability at the initial stage. In addition, it also causes to build strong coordination within the relationships. Firstly, for the betterment of children's education, parents are fully responsible to look after all their academic studies and fully concentrate on their children. It not only produces the self-confidence to perform his own work in a good manner but also helps to make a good decision in his life. Moreover, initial parental counseling provides good manners, discipline which even works during adolescence. In recent studies, children at the age of 6-10 with the assistance of parents home education is more productive in spite of the children's having no concentration by the parents. Secondly, for having a strong bonding between the families, parents are required to build strong coordination with their children to know more about their moral values and well-being. Furthermore, parents are their best mentor with whom they could share their all ups and downs of life. Good interaction with the parents make them even more encouraging and improving their vision in all aspects of life. Not only this but to achieve a great sense of understanding among family members to take valuable steps onward. To conclude all this, initially at early stages for better upbringing parental home education is quite necessary to found out more about their children personality and to strengthen the bonding between the family members.

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agreed
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parents
 should definitely spend more time instilling their children's homework for grooming purposes and flourish the child's ability at the initial stage. In addition
, it also
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to build
 strong coordination within the relationships.

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parents
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children
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own
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good
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but
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helps
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make
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 decision in his life. Moreover
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good
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children
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parents
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in spite of
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Secondly
, for having a strong bonding between the families, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
are required
 to build strong coordination with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 to know more about their moral values and well-being. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 are their best mentor with whom they could share their all ups and downs of life. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
Good
 interaction with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them even more encouraging and improving their vision in all aspects of life. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
 to achieve a great sense of understanding among family members to take valuable steps onward.

To conclude
 all this, initially
 at early stages for better upbringing parental home education is quite necessary to found out more about their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 personality and to strengthen the bonding between the family members. 