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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The demand for electricity is increasing worldwide, and using renewable energy is widely considered to be a pragmatic solution to meet this growing demand in cities and transportation sector. While design complexity together with a high capital cost may be limiting factors to replace conventional fossil fuel energy, I believe that alternative energy sources will dominate the energy mix to supply essential services. Analyzing the ability of sustainable energy to both provide a reliable and clean sources of energy, and protect the environment will show this.
The demand for electricity is increasing worldwide, and using renewable
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considered to be a pragmatic solution to
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this growing demand in cities and transportation sector. While design complexity together with a high capital cost may be limiting factors to replace conventional fossil fuel
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energy
, I believe that alternative
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energy
sources will dominate the
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energy
mix to supply essential services. Analyzing the ability of sustainable
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energy
to both provide a reliable and clean sources of
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energy
, and protect the environment will
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show
this.

IELTS essay Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. with this opinion?

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