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The arrangement of a institute sport center

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The given plans show the arrangement of a institutes sports centre now and how it will look after revival. Looking from all overall perspective, there are so many new things bhuit in future plans like sports Shop, dance studio and cafe in university sports centre. It is manifested from the first glimpse that in university sport center courts will be remove from that place whereas the gym of place will become big. Moreover reception and seating room situation will be at same place. Moving further to the rest if the grap, there will be put in 2 dance studio on the last side and sport mall will be prepared near to seating room furthermore, 2 changing room will be built one is east west direction and second is built on west last side whilest sports Shop and cafe will be adjoin in South side aport from this in the west side side there will be built poul.
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the arrangement of
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institutes
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sports
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centre
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now
and how it will look after revival. Looking from all
overall
perspective, there are
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many
new things
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bhuit
in future plans like
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sports
Shop, dance studio and
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cafe
in university
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sports
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centre
. It
is manifested
from the
first
glimpse that in university
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sport
center courts will be
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remove
from that place whereas the gym of place will become
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big
.
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Moreover
reception and seating room situation will be at same place. Moving
further
to the rest if the
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grap
, there will
be put
in 2 dance
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studio
on the last side and
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sport
mall will
be prepared
near to seating room
furthermore
, 2 changing room will
be built
one is east west direction and second
is built
on west last side
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whilest
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sports
Shop and
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cafe
will be
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in South side
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aport
from this in the west
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side side
there will
be built
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IELTS essay The arrangement of a institute sport center

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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