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The ALBAIK story began in 1974 in the city of Jeddah in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia

The ALBAIK story began in 1974 in the city of Jeddah in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia Ew553
The ALBAIK story began in 1974 in the city of Jeddah in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia when the late Shakour AbuGhazalah saw there was a need for high quality affordable food, served fast and courteously, in a clean and inviting environment. Putting all his hard earned savings in this venture, Shakour signed an exclusive agency agreement with a company abroad for usage of proprietary deep-fried chicken spice blends and equipment, being the first in the market to introduce the “broast” chicken concept in all of Saudi Arabia.
The
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ALBAIK
story began in 1974 in the city of
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Jeddah
in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia when the late
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Shakour
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AbuGhazalah
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saw
there was a need for high quality affordable food, served
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fast
and
courteously
, in a clean and inviting environment. Putting all his
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hard earned
savings in this venture,
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Shakour
signed an exclusive agency agreement with a
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company
abroad for usage of proprietary deep-fried chicken spice blends and equipment, being the
first
in the market to introduce the “
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broast
” chicken concept in all of Saudi Arabia.
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IELTS essay The ALBAIK story began in 1974 in the city of Jeddah in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
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