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Why is Global cooperation important?

Why is Global cooperation important? kWMMM
Global cooperation happens more and more people will learn to speak English which is a very (important) language nowadays from which tourists will get help during their communication in developed countries. Best benefits for countries that it will share knowledge as English language in schools to kids to increase their knowledge as it is possible to run their countries better. Global cooperation will develop country’s needs, wants, technologies and medical information which is very demanded for certain countries as a necessary profit. Global cooperation goals can lead everybody in anywhere in world together, for example saving some certain plants from climates which are used for preventing harmful disorders and diseases against living organisms on earth. Global cooperation communication also saves energy and reduce pollution. Can protect people’s health who works in high-risk factory.
Global
cooperation
happens more and more
people
will learn to speak English which is a
very
(
important
) language nowadays from which tourists will
get
help
during their communication in
developed countries
.

Best benefits for
countries
that it will share knowledge as English language in schools to kids to increase their knowledge as it is possible to run their
countries
better.

Global
cooperation
will develop
country’s
needs, wants, technologies and medical information which is
very
demanded for certain
countries
as a necessary profit. Global
cooperation
goals can lead everybody in anywhere in world together,
for example
saving
some
certain plants from climates which are
used
for preventing harmful disorders and diseases against living organisms on earth.
Global
cooperation
communication
also
saves energy and
reduce
pollution. Can protect
people
’s health who works in high-
risk
factory.
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IELTS essay Why is Global cooperation important?

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  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
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