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The air is getting worse and worse. What can be done to tackle it?

The air is getting worse and worse. What can be done to tackle it? 2R3gb
The increasingly worse of air quality have long been a major concern of today's society. This essay will presents solutions possible to solve such problem. To solve this situation effectively, a several methods can be mention. First of all, it is true that trees and all kinds of plants play a vital roles for the air. Thus, planting as well as afforestation can be knew as the most possible way to improve the air. In some countries, this solution have been acted by schools to educate pupil to protect environment as well as the air status. In addition, a kind of construction called ''eco-city'' has been built for protecting the air. It can be seen in Singapore as known a the cleanest nation in the world when they flagging 40% of air pollution by create eco-cities. There is no doubt that, planting tree and building eco-cities are measures that extremely effect to improve air quality. However, a factor that decide the air statu still human attitude to environment. According to environment experts, human insensitivity is the most primary culprit cause to air pollution. To fix this, people should using public transport instead of abusing private vehicle too much for moving. Moreovers, there are many resources of power can be used such as wind power, solar energy. In addition, there are several small activities can improve air quality like limit using smoke in public, planting indoor plant, turning off the light after using. In conclusion, there are a host of solution can protect environment as well as the air that people can applied. Every routine can connotation to the air for society.
The
increasingly
worse of
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air
quality have long been a major concern of
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today
's society. This essay will
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presents
solutions possible to solve such problem.

To solve this situation
effectively
, a several
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methods
can be mention.
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First of all
, it is true that trees and all kinds of plants play a vital
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roles
for the
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air
.
Thus
, planting
as well
as afforestation can be
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knew
as the most possible way to
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improve
the
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air
. In
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some
countries, this solution have
been acted
by schools to educate pupil to protect
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environment
as well
as the
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air
status.
In addition
, a kind of construction called ''
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eco-city
'' has
been built
for protecting the
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air
. It can be
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seen
in Singapore as known
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a the
cleanest nation in the world when
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they flagging
40% of
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air
pollution by create
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eco-cities
.

There is no doubt that, planting tree and building
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eco-cities
are measures that
extremely
effect to
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improve
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air
quality.
However
, a factor that decide the
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air
statu
still
human attitude to
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environment
. According to
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environment
experts, human insensitivity is the most primary culprit cause to
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air
pollution. To
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fix
this,
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people
should
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using
public transport
instead
of abusing private vehicle too much for moving.
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Moreovers
, there are
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many
resources of power can be
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used
such as wind power, solar energy.
In addition
, there are several
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small
activities can
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improve
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air
quality like limit using smoke in public, planting indoor plant, turning off the light after using.

In conclusion
, there are a
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host
of solution can protect
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environment
as well
as the
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air
that
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people
can applied. Every routine can connotation to the
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air
for society.
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IELTS essay The air is getting worse and worse. What can be done to tackle it?

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4 paragraphs
271 words
5.5
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