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The advantages and disadvantages of weddings

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In the recent decades, people spend lots of money on parties which is a great way to celebrate, be cheerful and have good memories. However, some individuals recoken that parties change the life of people in a society by changing the way they celebrate. To begin with, lots of families nowadays organize celebrations to get pleased and joyful such as holding celebrations after graduation of one of the family members or wedding. These happy events can bring amazing memories consequently they create a. positive image in the life of an individual. On the other hand, some pupils claim that parties lead to debt and economical issues as a result of spending a lot of money on parties and getting loans which they can't afford to pay them back. In addition, parties have not reflected the position of people in a society as people sometimes organize huge celebrations such as birthdays and weddings to show off themselves around. In conclusion, a party is a brilliant way of celebration and having fun but it should be regulated financially and in numbers.
In the recent decades,
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people
spend lots of money on
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parties
which is a great way to celebrate, be cheerful and have
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good
memories.
However
,
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some
individuals
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recoken
that
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parties
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change
the life of
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people
in a society by changing the way they celebrate. To
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begin
with, lots of families nowadays organize
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celebrations
to
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get
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pleased
and joyful such as holding
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celebrations
after graduation of one of the family members or wedding. These happy
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events
can bring amazing memories
consequently
they create a.
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positive
image in the life of an individual.
On the other hand
,
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some
pupils claim that
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parties
lead to debt and
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economical
issues
as a result
of spending
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a lot of
money on
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parties
and getting loans which they can't afford to pay them back.
In addition
,
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parties
have not reflected the position of
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people
in a society as
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people
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sometimes
organize huge
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celebrations
such as birthdays and weddings to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
off themselves around.
In conclusion
, a
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party
is a brilliant way of
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celebration
and having fun
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but
it should
be regulated
financially
and in numbers.
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IELTS essay The advantages and disadvantages of weddings

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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