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people should prefer to eat home~cooked meals rather than food stands or restaurants .

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I strongly believe that people should prefer to eat home~cooked meals rather than food stands or restaurants. Home cooked meals have lots of advantages. Firstly, home cooked meals are the most healthier way for eat rather than any other food places. In these days, food stands have too much bad reputation about their oils`. Oils are used by food industry is very cheap, and unhealthy because it is using for a month. If people choose to eat from food stands, they can have lots of health problems like hearth attacks, strokes, and uncontrollable weight gain. For example, Albert who is a volunteer for an experiment at USA. He has tried to eat food stands for a 2 months and he has gained 20 pounds. Then he could not loss these weights and he has turned an obesity person that is very dangerous. Moreover, restaurants are the most expensive way to eat. If a dish of meat cost is 20 $, ıt can be 60$ at restaurants because of taxes, employers `salary and restaurants` rent. In addition, home cooked meals are more cleaner than other places. People can know who is the chef, ıf they eat home cooked meal but at restaurants can not, Peple might find hair or nail from their foods. As a conclusion, because of all these reasons that I mentioned above I definetly support the idea of eating home cooked meals.
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. Home cooked
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have lots of advantages.
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are the
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places. In these days,
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food
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stands
have too much
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bad
reputation about their oils`. Oils are
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used
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industry is
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very
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cheap
, and unhealthy
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it is using for a month. If
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people
choose to
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, they can have lots of health problems like hearth attacks, strokes, and uncontrollable weight gain.
For example
, Albert who is a volunteer for an experiment
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. He has tried to
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stands
for a 2
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months and
he has gained
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20 pounds
. Then he could not
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loss
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weights and
he has turned an obesity person
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are the most expensive way to
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rent.
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are
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more cleaner
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can know who is the chef,
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home cooked
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at
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can not,
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Peple
might find hair or nail from their
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foods
. As a conclusion,
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definetly
support the
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IELTS essay people should prefer to eat home~cooked meals rather than food stands or restaurants.

Essay
  American English
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234 words
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