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Should we allow GM Food? Give reasons to support your opinion.

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In the information age, people always enhance their knowledge so there are numerous invents which are invented every year. Among those, we have an invents which can get well-paid job to farmers, this invent is called 'GM Food' by researchers. Therefore, any farmers who want to improve their wage can apply for the better life. In my opinion, I reckon that to get more money, farmers should apply those steps in this invent. On the one hand, a body growing body of research suggests that farmers is one of five current jobs which get the least wage from their major. Genetic modification (GM) of food is invented as a beneficial solution to alleviate this problem for farmers. In addition, growing normal crops brings farmers a plethora of risks because there are a lot of disasters can come and alter their life to turn back the first start. Taking Vietnam as an example, there are many ubiquitous invents in there, which were invented to boost farmers' life. It can obviously damage citizens' health but it will be cheaper than the way which farmers have to do by themselves. When individuals choose between two options high or low costs, they have to know that the quality of this product they receive is the same as the cost they paid before. Therefore, it is not damaging to farmers about this problem because choices are depended on customers and the missions of the farmers are to try their best to supply the best quality products for their customers. On the other hand, it is straightforward to completely understand about the worries of the customers about the quality of products. Customers can totally require to get those higher quality products but obviously they have to pay more money for such higher products. About the others, if they choose the products with low-cost and worse quality, they will accept the coming consequences which the products they bought in the paste can cause. We completely understand that they have to save money to pay other expenses in their life. Overall, although DM food have many adverse impacts on individuals who use products applied this invent in the past. In my opinion, I completely agree that farmers should enable to apply this invent into their crops but they still keep the old way which crops are grew by themselves. It is the best way to balance between farmers' life quality and customers' demands.
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invents
which can
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get
well-paid job to
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farmers
, this
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invent
is called
'GM Food' by researchers.
Therefore
, any
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farmers
who want to
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improve
their wage can apply for the better
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life
. In my opinion, I reckon that to
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get
more money,
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farmers
should apply those steps in this invent.

On the one hand, a body growing body of research suggests that
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farmers
is one of five
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current
jobs which
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get
the least wage from their major. Genetic modification (GM) of food
is invented
as a beneficial solution to alleviate this problem for
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farmers
.
In addition
, growing normal crops brings
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farmers
a plethora of
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risks
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there are
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come
and alter their
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life
to turn back the
first
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.

Taking Vietnam as an example, there are
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ubiquitous
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invents
in there, which
were invented
to boost farmers'
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life
. It can
obviously
damage citizens' health
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but
it will be cheaper than the way which
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farmers
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do by themselves. When individuals choose between two options high or low costs, they
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know that the
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quality
of this
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product
they receive is the same as the cost they paid
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before
.
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, it is not damaging to
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farmers
about this problem
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choices
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on customers and the missions of the
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farmers
are to try their best to supply the best
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quality
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products
for their customers.

On the other hand
, it is straightforward to completely understand about the worries of the customers about the
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quality
of
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products
. Customers can
totally
require to
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get
those higher
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quality
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products
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but
obviously
they
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have to
pay more money for such higher
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products
. About the others, if they choose the
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products
with low-cost and worse
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quality
, they will accept the coming consequences which the
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products
they
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bought
in the paste can cause. We completely understand that they
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have to
save money to pay other expenses in their life.

Overall
, although DM food have
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many
adverse impacts on individuals who
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use
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products
applied this
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invent
in the past. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
that
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farmers
should enable to apply this
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invent
into their crops
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but
they
still
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keep
the
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way which crops are
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grew
by themselves. It is the best way to balance between farmers'
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life
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quality
and customers' demands.
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IELTS essay Should we allow GM Food? Give reasons to support your opinion.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
405 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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