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The advantages and disadvantages of using e-books? v.1

The advantages and disadvantages of using e-books? v. 1
One of the greatest accomplishments of this day and age is the Internet, which enabled us to share information with the world. Anyone can read an online book or attend a class from home, this advancement in technology has led many people to prefer e-books over paper books. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of using e-books compared to paper books. The two main advantages of using e-books are the accessibility of e-books and the great decrease in paper manufacturing and paper waste. In others words, one may need to drive or pay for a public transportation in order to go to a bookstore and buy a paper book compared to downloading an e-book in his home. Moreover, paper manufacturing has a great impact on changing forests and changing the biodiversity, owing to that one must be aware of his paper usage. By encouraging the use of e-books instead of paper book we can as a society control the process of paper manufacturing as well as decreasing the amount of paper waste. On the other hand, using e-books has a few disadvantages such as the violence of copy rights that some writer suffers from and that reading from a mobile or a computer screen can increase one's screen time, which proved to be harmful. Through most of the websites that sell e-books are aware of the copy right and its legal issues there are some websites that distribute the e-books for free. This act can harm the writer and the publishing agency directly and cause serious consequences for the website owners. Also, many studies have proved the physical harm caused by spending long hours looking at a screen daily. Thus, by reading books on screen we might can harm more than good. In conclusion, the trend toward using e-books can help the environment and made reading easier. However, one must pay attention to his daily screen exposure and to the websites he chooses to buy books from.
One of the greatest accomplishments of this day and age is the Internet, which enabled us to share information with the world. Anyone can read an online
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book
or attend a
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class
from home, this advancement in technology has led
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many
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people
to prefer e-books over paper
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books
. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of using e-books compared to paper books.

The two main advantages of using e-books are the accessibility of e-books and the great decrease in paper manufacturing and paper waste. In others words, one may need to drive or pay for a public transportation in order to go to a bookstore and
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buy
a paper
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book
compared to downloading an e-book in his home.
Moreover
, paper manufacturing has a great impact on changing forests and changing the biodiversity, owing to that one
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must
be aware of his paper usage. By encouraging the
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use
of e-books
instead
of paper
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book
we can as a society control the process of paper manufacturing
as well
as decreasing the amount of paper waste.

On the other hand
, using e-books has a few disadvantages such as the violence of copy rights that
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some
writer suffers from and that reading from a mobile or a computer
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screen
can increase one's
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screen
time, which proved to be harmful. Through most of the websites that sell e-books are aware of the copy right and its legal issues there are
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some
websites that distribute the e-books for free. This act can harm the writer and the publishing agency
directly
and cause serious consequences for the
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website
owners.
Also
,
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many
studies have proved the physical harm caused by spending long hours looking at a
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screen
daily.
Thus
, by reading
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books
on
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screen
we
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harm more than
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.

In conclusion
, the trend toward using e-books can
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help
the environment and made reading easier.
However
, one
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must
pay attention to his daily
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screen
exposure and to the websites he chooses to
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buy
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books
from.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The advantages and disadvantages of using e-books? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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