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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of reading e-books outweigh its disadvantages? v.3

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of reading e-books outweigh its disadvantages? v. 3
In today’s world, the number of people prefer e-books to printed ones is rising at an excessive speed. It raises a controversy among people, whether upsides of e-books can overwhelmed their downsides. From my point of view, I totally concur with the idea that e-books are more beneficial than harmful. There are several merits that e-books bring to human. Firstly, using e-books is convenient. The purchasing process for these products is simple and done online, which save people’s time and money for transporting and waiting. With an internet-connected device, people can read e-books wherever and whenever they wish. Unlike heavy paper books, e-books can be stored in a small smartphone, which just weights a few hundred grams. They also do not become old or easily spoiled by dirt, time or weather. Secondly, e-books are more eco-friendly in comparison with paper books. E-books need no natural resources to create while producing printed books means cutting down a great number of trees every day. The fewer paper is made, the more forest areas remain and the better quality of the environment. However, it is irrefutable that e-books have their own demerits. First and foremost, reading e-books for a long time does harm to people’s eyes. Blue light from digital devices is believed to damage vision and can accelerate blindness. Therefore, people who often read books online continuously in a long time might suffer short-sighted and many other eye disorders. This negative effect can be reduced by giving our eyes, short intervals while reading. Another problem of e-books is that they can be easily lost. The reading experience might get interrupted due to the attack of virus or errors of the system. Notwithstanding, this situation does not regularly happen, which has little impact on readers. In conclusion, reading e-books is like a double-sided coin which has both its owns advantages and disadvantages. It is convenient and eco-friendly, but it harms people’s eyes and can be easily lost. However, I firmly believe that the benefits of reading e-books convincingly dominate the drawbacks of it.
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today
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prefer e-books to printed ones is rising at an excessive speed. It raises a controversy among
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people
, whether upsides of e-books can overwhelmed their downsides. From my point of view, I
totally
concur with the
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idea
that e-books are more beneficial than harmful.

There are several merits that e-books bring to human.
Firstly
, using e-books is convenient. The purchasing process for these products is simple and done online, which save
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people’s
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time
and money for transporting and waiting. With an internet-connected device,
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people
can read e-books wherever and
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they
wish. Unlike heavy paper
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books
, e-books can
be stored
in a
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small
smartphone, which
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weights a few hundred grams. They
also
do not become
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old
or
easily
spoiled by dirt,
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time
or weather.
Secondly
, e-books are more eco-friendly
in comparison
with paper
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books
. E-books need no natural resources to create while producing printed
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books
means cutting down a great number of trees every day. The fewer paper
is made
, the more forest areas remain and the better quality of the environment.

However
, it is irrefutable that e-books have their
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own
demerits.
First
and foremost,
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reading
e-books for a long
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time
does harm to
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people’s
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eyes
. Blue light from digital devices
is believed
to damage vision and can accelerate blindness.
Therefore
,
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people
who
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often
read
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books
online
continuously
in a long
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time
might suffer short-sighted and
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many
other
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eye
disorders. This
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negative
effect can be
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reduced
by giving our
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eyes
, short intervals while
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reading
. Another problem of e-books is that they can be
easily
lost. The
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reading
experience might
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get
interrupted due to the attack of virus or errors of the system. Notwithstanding, this situation does not
regularly
happen, which has
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little
impact on readers.

In conclusion
,
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reading
e-books is like a double-sided coin which has both its
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owns
advantages and disadvantages. It is convenient and eco-friendly,
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but
it harms
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people’s
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eyes
and can be
easily
lost.
However
, I
firmly
believe that the benefits of
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reading
e-books
convincingly
dominate the drawbacks of it.
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IELTS essay In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of reading e-books outweigh its disadvantages? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
340 words
6
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